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FrostTheWolf


Behold, the coming oblivion. 'Twas the end of our era, and the beginning of our great work. -Emet Selch

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'What happened to Cloudsdale?'

It is a simple question, yet one that the greatest of scholars that have studied the Age of Harmony could not find an answer for. It is a city that did not leave a mark upon the world like with Canterlot and Ponyville. Yet, it was the home of many species before magic had disappeared and the sundering of everything that kept them together. A Forgotten relic of an age long gone.

That is, until now.

But what awaits a trio of friends could change how they think of the past... and it's something none of them are prepared for


My first attempt at trying to write a story set within G5. It takes place after the Movie as well as the Make Your Mark special, but is considered an AU since the explanations for events that occurred in the G5 Comics are not present here.

This story was influenced a lot by several different things and is the culmination of everything that I have tried to write over the course of the last two months. The main sources of inspiration were the Forgotten series by milesprower06, the Ancients from Final Fantasy XIV as well as the Critical Role miniseries, Exandria Unlimited- Calamity.

Teen rated because of the discovery of things that would be deemed as unsettling by many.

Any feedback for future G5 stories would be really appreciated. I hope I got each of the characters right. Yet, trying to write G5 is completely different compared to writing the ponies we all are familiar with in G4


Credits to everything shown
My Little Pony, My Little Pony- Friendship is Magic and My Little Pony- A New Generation belong to Hasbro

Made it to the Popular Stories tab on 9/14/2022

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 4 )

This was pretty good.

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Thanks.

I... had some doubts when I started to undertake this project, but I'm glad you like it

I was totally expecting a Rainbow Factory tie in when I first clicked on this. Didn't get that but I was still very pleasantly surprised by this story. You put some great lore into storytelling the events of Cloudsdale and it unfolded in the story very well. Pretty nice work overall :twilightsmile:

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I wasn't trying to go for Rainbow Factory, but I am happy to hear that you enjoyed it. The main premise for what I had in mind for Cloudsdale was along the themes of 'Even when they were warned ahead of time, they couldn't prevent the calamity that was to come'. I drew that from a couple of inspirations that went into the story and served as motivation while I was working on it

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