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Lightningstripe25


MLP theorist, analyst, and reviewer for G4-G5, and vector shield maker on DA. But I enjoy writing stories in my free time, usually tragedy or things with strong emotions. (pfp by SchattenspielRex)

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While looking for answers about the past, the mane five discover the old changeling hive, and with it they find the only changeling left, who proceeds to tell them his story.

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“Oh, this?” The insect said, looking down at itself. “This is just a disguise I use to scare away humans. I’m not really a ‘monster bug’.”

Humans?? They're here in Equestria too??!! :pinkiegasp:

“That’s because,” he said. “I’m the last one still alive.”

That is also another sad theory that because of the magic disappeared most changelings probably died because of lack of love and Trust out there and probably that's what happened to the other creatures either they are in hiding or just basically died as well which that is so sad

“Anyways, after seeing how the ponies reacted during the attack, a lot of changelings decided to leave the hive for god, including one called Thorax.”

Ah yes everything did change when thorax came into the picture for the better

So it looks like sunny and the others discovered a mountain wait they thought it is and they went into that area but when they finally got closer it was a kingdom and little that they don't know this Kingdom belongs to the changeling but when they went inside they meet with a changeling name mantis which he was into a monster to scare off anybody but they stood their ground but they also asked him what happened over here so basically mantis decided to give them a little history about Twilight and basically his kind and boy so much things happened from the earlier season the comic and even season 6 that they told them about it and the sad part is he is the last of his kind because after the divided of ponies and the creatures the changelings are dying because without the love and Trust there is nothing to feed on I'm surprised that mantis stay alive this long but he still believes that There's Hope for the ponies and the creatures there's still a chance that maybe they can bring back that hope this was a pretty good story a sad one but good keep up the good work

There are some spelling errors, but overall really good story.

It was saddening to see the fate of the Changeling Kingdoms in the G5 era. I just hope that Sunny and her friends can make sure that The Magic of Friendship continues on and spread love and trust so the Changeling Kingdoms return back. There's still a mystery as to what happened to Twilight and her friends, but I'm hopping for 2022 we will get the answers.

11100849
thanks for the feedback! i'll see to it that the mistake are fixed. Also i really hope that the changelings are indeed alive in the G5 world

11100637
oh, my mistake, i meant to type ponies. i wrote a human version of the story for ELA class and that might have sneaked through

11100672
Thank you, and yeah, that is basically what happens

11100641
honestly, i really hope they're still alive, but in hiding.

11101127
Me too I've always asked that question what happened to the other creatures and I really do hope that they are just in hiding

11101135
same. It just wouldn't be the same without them! i really want to do a video explaining what could have happened to each and every kingdom. Most of them can take care of themselves, but some, like the changelings, cant. The real question everyone should be asking is where is the Crystal Empire?

11101149
That is also another good question like what happened to the major cities the only cities we only saw in the movie were 3 like what happened to Ponyville Manehattan Canterlot Cloudsdale and Etc like is it like far off in Equestria or something major disaster happen after the dividing of the tribes

"Says the one who spent her entire life more worried about flying than her own sister.”

solid burn, pipp

Yet again, the ponies huddled around Mantis and hugged him.

the mane 6 used to group hug alot after important events, so it's adorable seeing the mane 5 follow in their hoofsteps

11101165
It's certainly a theory. There's also the fact that there seems to be a lot less ponies around in G5 compared to G4. Maretown Bay can't be the only earth pony village, same with the other races. There's a lot of things that the movie didn't answer. On the bright side, it leaves a lot of space for people to made theory videos about them.

11101684
True also maybe those three cities are probably a far-off land of Equestria that was never appeared in the map of g4 even the later seasons but still I wonder what happened to most of the ponies I always wonder about that as well

11101695
Mare time Bay is on the G4 map it’s on the eastern coastline

Well this was a good story. But there are one thing I need to point out.

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And trapped her Andre the castle with the real Princess Cadance,

I think you meant 'under the castle.

11104472
did i really out Andre :twilightsheepish:? My bad, i'll fix it right now.

11104408
When the ponies arrived at the hive, it was midday, hence the fact that Hitch was to block the sun with his hoof. While I said that appeared from and disappeared into the horizon, I don't believe I said which direction they came from asides from "left" or "right" or where the sun actually was. Also, while there is a town next to Horseshoe Bay, it's never proven that it is Maretime Bay, just like we can't really be sure that Zephyr Heights is really Canterlot. There was a picture with the cities on a map behind Sunny and Izzy, and Maretime was on the south, with Briddlewood on the midwest and Zephyr Heights on the middle.

(Sorry if that sounded s little mean, my analytic instincts kicked in with me doing videos on this. If I did mess up the positioning somehow, please attach a quote to the paragraph(s) in which I made the mistake and I will do my best to fix it. It might be a fanfiction, but I still want it to fit the same world that is shown in the movie)

11106077
It's cool, we all make mistakes.

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