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As Nightmare Moon came on stage, declaring her intention of bringing eternal night, a bat-pony filly ask her an important but unexpected question: "If there is no more day, when do I sleep?"

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Skyblazer9

Skyblazer9 #1 · Sep 6th, 2022 · · ·

Very interesting story plot you came up here, I really enjoyed your story a lot.

Bigou

Bigou #2 · Sep 6th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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Thanks!

I know it’s cruel to end a story on a cliffhanger, but I don’t have the inspiration for what come next. If that change, then I will add more chapter(s). Otherwise, anyone with said inspiration can write a sequel.

Screw

Screw #3 · Sep 6th, 2022 · 1 · ·

Pretty curious plot idea, but the majority of the story is just a one creature exposition dump.

Bigou

Bigou #4 · Sep 7th, 2022 · · ·

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Yeah, I DO have progress to make in writing a story. I know. (Wouldn’t mind some help on that front, by the way.)

Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #5 · Sep 23rd, 2022 · 1 · ·

I went into this expecting some sort of short comedic piece, but instead got a massive loredump on an OC that I have no real reason to care about. If you wanted to write a story about your character, that's fine, but this was not at all the way to go about it if you wanted the audience to be engaged.