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Kindly die.
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Holy shit this was fucking amazing.
Please, write more.
(Boner, NOW IS NOT THE TIME!)
Was this really needed? Nopony was truly asking for a continuation of this story arc after how bad the first one was.
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Is any work of fanfiction truly needed? But I agree. A sequel to a bad story's going to be a bad story in of itself.
OK... I was not expecting that.
I can delete my browsing history, but I can't delete the nightmares.
Worst thing I read in at least a week. Shame on you, seriously.
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I'm.. Kinda scared to read it.
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I am forever shamed.
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I'd suggest not reading it. Or its prequel. Or anything else I've written.
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Comments like this really make me lose faith in this fandom. I don't care if the story is bad, that doesn't give you the right to act like cunts.
1309996 My guess is you've never heard of an opinion.
1309986 Success! No but seriously, what were you thinking? And I am honestly curious, if you'd like to elaborate.
I mean stylisticly it wasn't too bad... but I actually felt a little sick while reading through this. So if that was your intention, I should probably give you a thumbs up, since your mission was clearly accomplished.
1309996 What, you aren't allowed to express dislike anymore?
1309986 Sheesh man don't be like that :/
What's really so bad about it?
You shouldn't feel bad though. I really don't like gore fics in general
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Hey, man. Thanks for the defense. The way I see it, though, is that if you don't get a few death threats every now and then, you're using the Internet wrong. As for The Dragon Warlock and Loki, they're entitled to their opinions, and the ability to express them. This story very well be the worst thing Loki's read in a week. Note, though, that we have no idea how much Loki reads. It's possible Loki's an idiot savant who can read several thousand words a minute, and therefore is able to consume all the new fanfiction posted to this site in a matter of seconds. It's possible he doesn't do much more than critique fanfiction posted to this site for his entire day. He could do nothing but read six star fanfictions with one story a week in the just posted section. Always balance the critique with the source. The only real issue with Dragon Warlock up there is that he used the term "everypony" instead of everybody. But we can forgive him, right?
1309996 And for that matter, I did read the first story that this was a sequel to and it was bad then and it's still bad now. This was an uncalled for story that nopony demanded.
<3<3<3<3 But I get no mention. Slightly disappoint.
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What was I thinking as I wrote this story? Something along the lines of "Ok, seriously. This idea's so dumb it just might be funny."
As it was being uploaded? "I certainly hope no one reads this and takes it seriously."
As I was reading all these comments? "Ha, this is hilarious. I can't believe people are reading this and taking it seriously."
1310637 Double post is doubled. For the rest... no matter how serious, poor Rarity!
You could have at least used the unlikable pony! If there'd be one. Maybe that minotaur fellow, Iron Will. Cow is at least acceptable human food. Allthough you might need to cut his balls of and wait a while, before he becomes fit for consumption. ;)
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Speak for yourself, mate. I've eaten horse and smores before.
WHY WOULD I READ THIS! RARITY IS MY FAVORITE AND I WAS JUST ABOUT TO "EAT" HER!
1310052 I for one demanded it.
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1310974 That explains so much... =)
... Im not quite sure what happened here. Either the smore analogy was just an analogy, or suddenly Rarity is a marshmallow. I need to lie down and think about this.
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Rarity's always been a marshmallow. I had to rectify this fact. In the original, she was flesh and bone. In this one, now she's her true form. Marshmallow and chocolate and graham crackers.
I... I don't understand this, I really don't. Even as someone who would normally be into this, it's an active turn-off. You seem to have intentionally made something that doesn't even have that as justification. In the comments of the first chapter, you said it was a comedy story, but I am completely unable to see humor in either of these. I have no idea what you were even trying to do, I'm sorry. I can give you advice if you wanted to make this into a fetish story, or if you meant to write a horror story, if you want.