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AppleLauda99942


inofficialy the fastest Brony alive (60 meters PB: 7.01 seconds manually timed)

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As the season comes to a end, there's one more major battle before the champion will be declared. Spa was for years the host of the Forza season finale. But what if the Forza season finale takes place at the famous Nürburgring?

Teen rated because of language

Original Story: Forza 2023 Season finale by RushingWind-01
Forza fanfic owned by TunedPonyRC

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 38 )

1 thousanth of a second!
That's not much in it.

11332729
Yep... That's a blink of a eye

Apple Lauda gets eye contact with everyone. Zipp, Sunny and Fluttershy managed to catch up to Applejack, but Akula, Viral and Silverstream are right behind them. "is that Apple Lauda approaching?" Silverstream asks through the radio as they approach the Carousel. "yes and he's having a incredible pace!!! Whenever you can, let him through, we only need either two more of us in the top 4 or someone in first with one of you in the top 4." Nico says. "copy" Akula responds. "We need to give him double slipstream" Viral says. "HOLY CRAP!!!" Silverstream shouts as she gets overtaken by her boyfriend. "HE'S ON FIRE!!!" she shouts as they blast through Hedwigshöhe. "IT'S OVER 9000!!!!!" Apple Lauda shouts through the radio. "no wonder why he's catching up on us so fast!!! He's revving the car like hell!!!" Akula responds.

9000mph???

11332758
ppphhht, I can beat him with real racing.


Idk what he did for that much speed

11332770
Track knowledge lol. Also that Apple Lauda is so good on the Nordschleife, that's because I am very good at Nordschleife on GT Sport (I dominated these daily races.)

11332772
oh, it would be a shocker if a rookie wins with racing advise that you dont know.😎

Comment posted by MatTheBook deleted Aug 15th, 2022

11332772
I know how to win😏

11332778
Lmao Apple Lauda is using Ayrton Senna's throttle technique

11332791
I know my ways🏁

11332791
Dont be so confident😎
I learned racing for a few years.
I know many things

After that, Assetto came over to Apple Lauda. "how on earth did you catch up so fast?" Assetto asks with a chuckle. "I just went at maximum attack, that's all" Apple Lauda answers. "Of course you did..." Assetto says. "it was very close actually. Fluttershy almost had you" "Well yes but I had to back off or else I would have crashed into Fluttershy. And I don't want to win like that." Apple Lauda says. "that was great Sportsmanship there what you've done with Fluttershy." Assetto responds. "thanks... I was going for the gap but I knew it was too close and in the worst case, I would have crashed too, replicating Senna/Prost Suzuka 1989 on Nordschleife" Apple Lauda answers. "we will get you guys next year" Assetto says with a smile. "only time knows... Only time knows" Apple Lauda says with a laugh.

next times win wont be yours.
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11332800
Are you sure about that? xD

11332807
Can I make my own version, because I know exactly what needs to be done for victory.
It will all be worth it at the end.

Dont be so confident😉
I will show you true racing🏁

11332811
Sure, you have my permission.

The thing is (it's about me now) I learned to drive like Niki Lauda did. Then I started to use Ayrton Senna's throttle technique and the rest is history as they say :)

11332823
Well you will be left in the dust thanks to the one and only

Hudson Hornet.

He is my inspiration and taught me everything( not really but I learned alot thanks to him)

11332823
Is world building allowed?

11332831
As long as it follows the rules of this website yes.

11332859
first; imformation

Who are all the members of the Equestrian motorsport team?

Where are their location in the world?

Who is the leader of the team?

Who is the CEO of the sport?

11332868
Well to be honest you should ask TunedPonyRC for permission before you do that.
Because I don't want you to get in trouble

Comment posted by MatTheBook deleted Aug 15th, 2022

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Are these based on the gameplays?

11332920
Can you ask him?
I dont want to interupt his business, besides you guys are good friends.

A pointer:

"is it really true that we go on Nordschleife Assetto?" Fluttershy asks.
“Well yes and we're going to have a very tough battle with Akula-Lauda Racing, especially with one specific driver..." Assetto answers.
“We all know Apple Lauda is extremely fast on the Nordschleife, I mean... He's already pulling 8:11/8:12 minute laps again." Zipp mentions.
“we can still beat them everyone!!! Apple Lauda will be the final boss. The only chance we might have is on the GP circuit." Sunny responds. "I did beat him once, and now I will destroy him on Nordschleife!!!!"
“I wouldn’t be that sure..." Fluttershy says as she points on the scoreboard. Apple Lauda improved by two seconds, Akula improved also by about 2 seconds, Viral Velocity improved by 5 seconds and Silverstream improved by 3 seconds."

This wall of text format is difficult to read. When another character begins speaking, it should be formatted like starting a new paragraph:

"is it really true that we go on Nordschleife Assetto?" Fluttershy asks.

“Well yes and we're going to have a very tough battle with Akula-Lauda Racing, especially with one specific driver..." Assetto answers.

“We all know Apple Lauda is extremely fast on the Nordschleife, I mean... He's already pulling 8:11/8:12 minute laps again." Zipp mentions.

“we can still beat them everyone!!! Apple Lauda will be the final boss. The only chance we might have is on the GP circuit." Sunny responds. "I did beat him once, and now I will destroy him on Nordschleife!!!!"

“I wouldn't be that sure..." Fluttershy says as she points on the scoreboard. Apple Lauda improved by two seconds, Akula improved also by about 2 seconds, Viral Velocity improved by 5 seconds and Silverstream improved by 3 seconds."

Just a pointer; otherwise, good job.

11332920
How should I ask him for this?

Okay, that is a good way of an alternate ending.

And hey, maybe next year, you'll have a rival on the North Loop, because damn, one milsecond, that's the closest margin I ever saw.

Eldorado
Moderator

You'll want to change that short description - it needs to describe what's going on in the story, not just what you're spinning off from.

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Just ask him. It's very easy

11333766 hahaha yeah I definitely should

11333886
Just

"Yo my man! Gonna create fan inspired Forza story. Is that alright with you?"


😂😂😂😂

11333884
I just have so many questions

11333892
Ask him: "is it okay for you if I write a story about your Forza MLP Fanfiction?"

1133393

I'll give a hint

11333934
I'll give hints


'One last chance'


'One more dream'


'It's not over'


'Until they strike back'


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