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Rainbow Dash is battling cancer in hospital. The doctors say there's a certain chance she will die. But Rainbow Dash decides to fight cancer actively. But the question is: will she survive?
Written in remembrance of Alex "Technoblade" (1999-2022)
Disclaimer: I do respect Technoblade and his family, friends, etc.
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percentage inconsistency between paragraphs 3 and 8
Good story, could use a better opening than "a few weeks ago"
ponies don't drive, they cart
thats all thank you for the story... currently working on a short story like this myself.
cant thumbs up or down at this point
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The thing is that I classify carting and driving differently. It depends on what category the ponies are in. But yes you're right... Imma fix this lol.
Also I try my very best to be consistent.
(says the author of this story who is stabbing the throttle in the corners)
A soft sad no one died... it didn't have a lot of emotion feeling for the character... well it did but it wasn't powerful enough to make me grow a tear.
Well this definitely ended better than Technoblade’s story. Shame.
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Yeah I know...
This story should represent the outcome it was supposed to be. Unfortunately it came out different...
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I tried my best but when I run out of ideas, I shift into another gear and get new ideas
“Will she survive?”
If see is with me, the British Speedfreak, hard yes