• Member Since 24th Oct, 2011
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Whirring Gears


A guy with crazy ideas and a little free time.

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I, I can't even...there are no words to describe my satisfaction with this story.

Gears, you are a...

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Haha!
But seriously, WG - you have outdone yourself with this one.
This fic was crazy. Crazy awesome!


I can guarantee that no one who reads this fic will ever forget it. Woo, boy.

(Not to, uh ... over-sell it or anything. Just sayin'. I thought it was pretty wild.)

Well. That was certainly... different.

Can't say breast-expansion is my fetish, but your writing still paints clear pictures. So considering what I just read... :rainbowlaugh: Oh man, the mental images.

Good read, as always.

1298594
I second this motion.

I have a nosebleed.

1307515
Same here, and this isn't even a fetish of mine
The feeling in your pants tells a different story...:ajsmug:

1307566

If it wasn't a fetish of mine it probably is now......maybe...I don't know. All I know is I got a nosebleed and....something else right now.......:twilightblush:

Nosebleed I have a brain bleed holy crap this story is awesome!

Wow, I never knew anyone else in this fandom wrote BE stories. :derpytongue2:

Here, take my very first +Fav on this site.

My two deepest, most hidden desires in one . . . story. :twilightoops: I'm not really sure how what I'm feeling right now.

Well, that was different, a refreshing change :twilightoops:

Nice fic for a humanized ponies "clop", I'll be looking forward to other works you'll make from here on out. keep up the good work man, and best regards.:eeyup:

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And Carlos assured me I had a concept of "yes, there are breasts I think are too big". :trixieshiftright:
Like fuck there's such thing as "too big!" :heart: :rainbowwild: :heart:

...what just happened?

This will be staying in my head forever :rainbowlaugh:

Definitely not my cup of tea, I read it all the way through. I gotta say this is the first time I've ever truly felt like "What the fuck just happened". The breast milk part of it was just too much for me.

New favorite Fic! i imagined my crush as Fluttershy. It was amazing.

It was good, but tough to tell who was where and how sometimes

1298594

finding out way too much about you today

outside that this story unfortunately got me enjoying the author enough to watch now....not sure why I didn't after love two other stories before.

My absolute favorite fetishes, combined with my absolute favorite character. I do believe that this is my absolute favorite story ever, now.

Do you have any other humanized 2nd person fics?

1315486 Well you should make some more. This was really good. Also what I expected to happen was
House blows up. What happened? Rarity RD and Twilight say. Second base you say.

must say that is freaking genius

and now for snipers review



HOLY DOODEY!!!
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Brilliantly done. Personally, I think this one, strangely, is better that Trix Tix. Maybe I've found my new fetish. I dunno. Here's to a good story.

Sweet mother of all things dark and fiery, I've read this thing THREE TIMES in as many days.

If that doesn't speak volumes of how you MUST WRITE MOAR, then I don't know what would.

I personally find it to be quite strange to be blatantly announcing what is or is not one's fetish on the Internet, so I will not be partaking in that act in the comments here... However, I hope it will suffice to say that this clopfic was, in no uncertain terms, relevant to my interests.

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I'm not too sure when humans became a fetish

This was really good. very sexy. you should think about doing something with twilight and rainbowdash if you can think of ideas.:pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile:

You are an amazing writer. But... Not my taste there, I mean I like a good sized set, but um... Yeah.... That was a bit extreme with the whole milk thing... You have an excellent style and writing capabilities, very vivid. Vivid enough to scare me certainly...:twilightoops: I'm confused, so confused. Up until the whole bean bag sized and milk bit I was on board one hundred percent, but then I kinda got scared... Again, excellent imagery and style.:twilightoops:

I would definitely would love it if you did something like this again, it was lovely.

Okay. I just read for the second time in so many hours. And I must say, it was just as amazing as the first time.

It starts off innocently enough... for a clop-fic, that is. What followed next was an odd yet sensual chain of events that I found to be slightly weird, arousing, and yet in keeping with a romantic air throughout. Truly, a masterpiece. Well written, shyly hot, and would have been a frickin' buffet for a changeling.

Regarding the premise of the story. It's actually pretty believeable, seeing as a humanized Fluttershy is commonly viewed as being... well-endowed, and RD isn't. In keeping with 'Shy's personality, she wouldn't want others to feel jealous or upset because of her. Though I have my doubts about Twilight's ability to play matchmaker, I can see how her logic and reasoning could come into play for this fic to work the way it does. Though if 'my/our/2ndPOV' calculations were true, 'Shy may have had a problem with her house in short order. Which, as an afterthought, I find to be hilarious.

Regarding 'fetishes'. I think we can all agree that if this fic didn't have any of our fetishes before, it does now. It was too good not to add to our... preferences. And for the record, who cares what we prefer. We want it, we look for it. We don't want it, we don't look for it. Simple as that.

That being said, I find myself surprised someone didn't do something like this sooner. Good work, Whirring Gears.

I find my only 'complaint' would be a lack of actual intercourse, though I can see how it would be rather difficult to manage given the circumstances. Sequel, maybe? It'd certainly be just as much of a hit as this was, if not more.

Maybe I'm overanalyzing, maybe I should stop typing and go someplace else. But I am, I'm not, and well, here we are.

Final rating: :yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

10/10 :yay:

Keep on clo-er, writin'!

Zimprus Nalune

Oh my god.
Lactating?

THIS FIC WAS MADE FOR THE SOLE PURPOSE OF MAKING ME FAIL TO RESIST THE URGE TO BOARD THE FAP FAP TRAIN

I don't even..

Damn hot, really really hot :heart:

1311470
You have no clue what real WTF is then

I... Don't know.

Well, All I can say is I reccomend it if you are not afraid of clop fics so basically
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Twilight Sparkle! How dare you stoop to trickery like this! You're as bad as Celestia!
...Though, I must admit, it was nice...
Also! I find the last two paragraphs funny. Take that, Rainbow Dash!
One more thing, 1377299 makes some good points, though our opinions of the lack of true intercourse differ greatly, as far as I can tell.

Well, that certainly happened. :applejackunsure:
Guess that'll teach me to make assumptions about a story's content before reading. Good work.

I find it strange how the main character acts very much like I would in such a situation. And my OC is a unicorn! In fact, if I didn't knoiw any better, I'd think you based him on me!
...Fortunately, I know better. I'm not that stupid...

1315597
Who needs that amount of glasses?
I Just were Sun Glasses all the time

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