It's been three months since the changeling invasion was put down. Twilight Sparkle has been working on a spell that can call the Elements to their holders to make it much easier to prevent another attack. When she goes to try it, things don't work out as planned.
The six bearers are teleported to a place they've never seen with technology far more advanced than they had ever dreamed of. The beings on the ship call themselves the "Terran" and resemble the humans of legend.
A/N: This is my first story so, please, only constructive criticism. The story will take place not long after the events of Starcraft II: Wings of Liberty and, as such, will not make use of the Heart of the Swarm expansion.
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To early to make an definite comments yet. It has nice structured paragraphs and no run-on sentences, so that's good.
Hmmmmmmmm - Filed into read later
Wow. Dis gon b gud. Or that's what I hope for. Faved, anyways.
Well, now I know I need to get my StarCraft crossover started.
I going to take a guess at what the mane 6 would be if they became SC2 Terran units.
Twilight Sparkle: Battlecruiser. Twilight seems to be more of a strategist instead of a direct fighter. So I can see her up there given orders.
Applejack: Marauder. She the strongest of the mane 6 and I don't see her being much of a vehicle driver.
Rainbow Dash: Viking. She can attack air and ground unlike the Banshee.
Fluttershy: Medivac. I don't think I need to explain this one.
Pinkie Pie: Ghost. She appears out of fucking now where all the time and I don't know where she carries half the crap she has.
Rarity: Raven. This is probably the toughest one to think of. Rarity is more of a Protoss unit than anything else. But in the end I made her a Raven because of the fact she strikes me as being more of a observer than a fighter.
oh this sounds good, i'll put into read later as I'm trying to finish reading the 3 stories i already have open right now.
Wow, thanks guys. To be honest, I never even dreamed of this kind of positivity.
At any rate, I'm still not entirely sure where I'm going with this, so any suggestions would also be welcome, not only for the main story but also side stories.
I guess I'll see where this goes. And because of the context of this story, I had to pause for a momnent at "She had not enough energy."
If you want to lol around, you could make Rainbow a Reaper.
An engaging synopsis with a promising plot, but the writing... I don't think it's quite there yet.
can you get the robot doggies? the Predator? i loved them think what fluttershy would do
those things need love too!
also firebates. firebats EVEYWHERE!
And the crew is probably thinking that Raynor has finally lost it....
1310604 Those would be good guesses. But someone already made an animation for the mane six. Take a look! He does it very well.
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I can only imagine. but considering they've been fighting zerg, colorful ponies is probably a nice change.
You have me interested at least. Good start but too early to tell if this is going to be a good story yet.
EEYEAH!!! FELLOW STARCRAFT BRONIES! /)
How often do you think you'll update? Or at least when will the next chapter come out?
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Something like that, at least, until they actually see them.
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I haven't a clue. My original intention was to put them out when they were done, but I think I may have to change that. The next one should be ready in a couple of days, and it will be longer than these two so far.
1313123 okay, cool. By the way, was this at all inspired by Halo: On the Wings of Angels by Gyvon? The two are remarkably similar.
1313186 While I have read that one, not really. Other than the facts that they are both Sci-Fi Pony crossovers and get set off by similar spells going awry, there is no real inspiration from it.
1313192 yup. That's about what I got too. :D
1311333 Holy shit those were awesome. I loved Pinkie's and Twilight's, they're fucking hilarious. I still think that Dash should be Viking and Applejack Marauder, but besides that, I think I agree with the ones he made more.
1313768 Glad ya like em!
This is a great idea, and I hope you keep at it. Best of luck, and keep on writing
great now I don't want to write my fic
Anyone else ever think someone should do to Starcraft what Kkat did to Fallout? Chanelings = zerglings, alicorns = protoss, ponies = terrans, it practically writes itself.
you must construct additional chapters.
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The next chapter is complete, I just need my editor to come online so we can look over it together.
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Are you a wizard?
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Part time.
MY LIFE FOR AIUR! I mean, StarCraft/My Little Pony crossovers. Yeah, that's what I meant.
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In other news, great story so far. StarCraft is fast becoming the new Fallout in crossovers, which is buckin' awesome! I never thought that there would be people interested in both StarCraft and MLP, like me, but I am proven wrong once again.
Keep up the good work!
-DivideByZero
Talk about random.
Leave it to Pinkie Pie to plan a party out of nowhere. Poor Jim
MOAR! This was COCK TEASE! But still very much to my liking.
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GIVE
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MOAR
Now the million dollar question for this is... Did Pinkie Pie know about the human as a species before hand or is this just her spontaneous nature taking over?
where we are and nothing makes sense...
Tell me about it
Interesting story here. I believe Twilight would like to meet some Protoss, hopefully not the Taldarims... I'm less sure about Fluttershy meeting Zergs though.
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Fluttershy + Zerg = One of two possibilities. One, Fluttershy wanting to stay on the Hyperion at all times. Two, DEATH OF ALL THINGS!
...For everyone's sake, let us pray that Fluttershy never makes contact with the Zerg. She could be a deadlier Overmind replacement than Kerrigan at worst.
On a serious note, glad to see three out of six are together, and I'm about to feel terribly sorry for Raynor. He just had first contact with Pinkie Pie.
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Gladly they arrive after Kerrigan have been cleansed on Char. But I personally fear the Fallen one with his hybrids and followers might especially want to get their claws on Twilight if they learn about her amount of
magicpsionic power... that, and her smartness, could make her a powerful and quick-witted infested-unicorn commander...1359974
I've actually thought about Twilight's magic/psionic power thing. If I ever bother sitting down and actually working on my story, that's going to be a major plot point in my story. Terrans and Protoss alike will want Twilight contained or destroyed, as they would consider her too powerful to leave alone due to... well, Kerrigan.
Realistically, nobody would want another Kerrigan.
Other than a few misspellings, the grammar is decent enough in my eye. I really like this story, too. Keep it up!
(a "two" is spelled as "tow")
1368057 Mainly it's my keyboard. It likes to act up quite a bit and I don't always notice the mistakes.
Me gusta.
1368090 Less of a cock tease, I hope.
Pardon me while I prepare to sing my feelings.
*clears throat *
MOOOOAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!
So now that the gang is back together again, we're going to see some stuff happen, right?
1368099 It was good.
I just remembered... in the Armory were (least in the game) Marauders and Firebats... I don't even... Wha... My mind is comfuzzled right now.
While it's great that Pinkie Pie managed to get Raynor to laugh, I have to wonder what she did to the Thors, the Firebats, the Marauders (both of whom have to be asking themselves "What the hell?"), the Vikings, and the Ghosts/Spectes. Depending on whether or not Tosh is still alive.
1368063 I know that feel