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Jack Daniels


Some day you will find me, caught beneath a landslide, in a champagne supernova in the sky.

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Applejack's life as a spy hasn't left her much room to be the kind of sister that she wants to be to her younger sibling Applebloom. To make it up to her she's promised she would be at her play tonight, which shouldn't be too hard. All she has to do is finish her mission: infiltrate a high-profile charity gala and retrieve a stolen list containing the names of various Organization operatives before it can be sold to the highest bidder. But a chance encounter with a mysterious woman threatens to make things more complicated.

(Very) loosely based on Spy x Family

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

Okay but see NOW you have to do more with this little universe. I'd recommend maybe for a sequel being the 'official' first book since the ending and the romance are the only parts that feel kinda out of place, mainly the one shot nature means they pick up on their feelings a TAD quickly and the ending resolved things a bit too easily for my tastes, but overall I love the direction this can go!

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I was thinking the same, it would do well if it was continued

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Thanks so much for the feedback!
The endings are always really tricky for me and I wanted to leave it there in case I didn't come back to it.
This is an idea I definitely want to revisit though, maybe after I get some more practice in on a couple more stories so I can really do this pair justice.

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You're still doing damn good.

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NP! If you want a further discussion we can take it to DMs so we don't clog the comment section.

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Thank you so much for the review! This is like the third one I've gotten in about a week and they've all been so great. I'm glad anyone at all is paying attention to the stuff that I write.

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