Cover art: Izzy Moonbow
By artist: Fensu-San
While Sunny and Izzy were preparing lunch that day, Izzy discovers that she can do more than levitation. This leads to some unfortunate problems around Maretime Bay and beyond.
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Quoterific
I'm not the greatest writer, but specialising on short and simple stories of cute ponies from MLP:FiM and G5. Just your fan from the UK.
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This is an excellent fic.
I love Izzy. She's the best G5 unicorn. I am very interested to see if you'll do a sequel regarding Sunny and her "alicorn" magic? Maybe Izzy can teach Sunny something?
11231419
That could be a possibility. This one came to mind first and idea processing for me starts off slow. Most stories of mine are fan art inspirations
I could see something like this being an actual episode of the series.
11231431
Thank you for the compliment
Well that was a very funny story here so it looks like sunny and izzy are basically just hanging out but then it was close to lunchtime and and they were preparing for lunch but unfortunately the pepper had different plans for Izzy and when she sneeze she disappeared and Sunny just realized that she teleport and apparently she's been going around a lot and first of all she teleport to hitch house but he was in the middle of his bath time which that scared him a lot and before he say anything she sneezed and she was gone again and it looks like pipp Was preparing doing a livestream of her music video but then Izzy showed up out of nowhere and interrupt her live stream but then she teleport again and she showed up right beside zipp while she was flying which that's pretty impressive that you can hover but then suddenly she seems again and teleport both of them too Maretime Bay and it looks like the whole gang was here seeing what the heck was happening and explain about what just happened so apparently Izzy's power is starting to get a Little Bit Stronger but with all the craziness has been happening it looks like they have their lunch time together this was a pretty funny story keep up the good work
11231431
Yes! Yes it could! An animated short/promo for the series easily.
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Oh yeah, totally could see it as an episode of "Tell Your Tale" or the like.
Wait, Hitch is worried about being seen naked, but yet most of the time he doesn't wear any clothes...
Like melt my heart, say ACAB to Hitch, and usurp Ponker's previously unchallenged spot at the top of Best Pony List?
11231419
FTFY
11231936
I was more thinking of the light adult humour of a mare and stallion in the same shower together
I cannot express how much I love these G5 stories from you! They're just such nice bite-sized stories and give so much enjoyment every time! Hope you didn't mind, but I couldn't resist making a reading of this funny lil' fic of yours!
Audio Linkyloo!: https://youtu.be/2AYOuZ-Ygos
Great job on the exchanges, characterizations and general wrap-up to this one-shot. Indeed, I COULD definitely see this being an actual short in the "Tell Your Tale" series. Considering magic hasn't been back for that long, it makes sense that Izzy might not know she can teleport until something like this happens. And the extremely minor adult humor concerning Izzy teleporting in on Hitch while he was in the shower was a good touch. Adult enough for grown-ups to catch, but minor enough that a kid wouldn't, so it still fits into an "Everyone" rating (like Looney Tunes and MOST episodes of Animaniacs). Of course, if Hitch threatened to use hoofcuffs and Izzy looked a bit too excited about it, THEN we might need a "Teen" rating, but it didn't go that way.
And, yeah, Zipp and Izzy trying to help Sunny learn to activate and use her "training wheels Alicorn" abilities might be a good future "episode", but THAT would probably have to wait until after "Make Your Mark".
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Thank you for your quick insight. I was definitely going for the light-hearted humour, like in the first Equestria Girls movie when Twilight stumbled into the boys' toilets.
Oh Izzy XD
New magic is nothing to...
Wait for it...
.... sneeze at!
I'll just go over there...
11231431
I had always thought it would be cool to watch unicorns (mostly Izzy) rediscover magic beyond levitation. With no experienced wizards to help them practice safely, there'd be ample opportunity for comedic failure like this.
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And... less comedic failure, the kind they can't use in canon because their target audience is little girls.
This was fun!
I think the end of the sentence should be changed a bit. Like, add more or removed to begin shaking.
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And remove some in the last sentence.
That second sentence should be changed to this. "Unicorn magic was something not only for her, but also earth ponies and pegasi, who were all tryung to get used to."
Magic + things that make a unicorn sneeze = magical shenanigans. Good thing it was just something mostly harmless.