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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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(Takes place immediately following "Crusaders of the Lost Mark". Proofread and edited by deadpansnarker. Featured on 4/15/2022.)

Diamond Tiara has become a new pony, a much nicer one at that. And she's ready to make amends with those she's previously wronged, no matter who they might be.

However, the very first pony she has to apologize to is none other than Silver Spoon. And that's a bit of a problem because Silver isn't entirely sure Diamond's change of heart is sincere.

Diamond desperately wants to reclaim the friendship she once had, and desperately wants Silver to believe that she's changed. But can she find the right words? And more importantly, will they be enough to convince Silver?

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very nice that you addressed this, the could have needed more apperences. Say, could you imagine them so close they would not hesitate to help each other in dire needs?

FANTASTIC story. Credit especially to the talented editor... where did you find this amazing guy?! :pinkiegasp:

The glasses wearing filly finally managed to say an actual sentence as she replied. "Yes, but it's more than that, Diamond," She let out a sigh. "I know I can't stay mad at you forever. But I want to stay mad at you. Not for forever, but just for a little while. That wasn't the first time you treated me like I meant nothing to you, like our friendship didn't matter. You've taken advantage of my friendship before, and you've always pleaded with me to give you another chance. Yet it seems like every time I do, you just keep making the same mistakes over and over again."

And with that, this has probably become one of the best stories I’ve ever read.

Although this was a pretty nice story after that events which that was the best episode ever of season 5 to me at least Diamond Tiara is looking back the past of what she done and said to the other ponies was very mean and very hateful what she did but the one she really needs to make amends with was silver spoon and yeah where they saw each other again it was awkward because they had no idea how to say to each other Diamond Tiara doesn't expect silver spoon to become friends all she wanted is to say that she was sorry and she would accept her forgiveness after all the things she's done to Silver and the same time silver could not stay mad at her even though she wanted to but after that it looks like they really did forgive each other and this is a good start and the bright future ahead of these two making a right decision this was a pretty good story keep up the good work

But I feel like everyone would've loved to see a scene like this in the show before Diamond and Silver were unceremoniously discarded.

And yeah you're right I blame Hasbro for not continuing with this I would expect it a little bit more Redemption for these two but they just suddenly just disappeared for no apparent reason it's the same thing with Gilda the only ones who got lucky enough what's Discord Trixie Starlight and sunset and any of those characters are not in there they probably would disappeared in a Flash so thanks a lot Hasbro 😡

That was a good story.

Good story. This idea should have been an episode. :twilightsmile:

Unceremoniously discarded is a good way to put it

Happy 1st (late) Anniversary!

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