Spike knew it would be dangerous to retrieve the Bell with his friends, but he wasn't about to let them go without him. No pony would have expected to him to become collateral but when Chrysalis made good on her threat to his wings that's what happened. Everyone is dealing with the results now. Spike with his loss, Twilight with her guilt, other friends with being there for the young dragon. Their friendship is strong, they'll find a way, they just hope it isn't too painful a road for him.
Chapters (2)
I'm surprised Gabby is not there she is friends with Spike right?
might need more chapters before I can make any critique.
Spike losing his wings angst? Nice! Well done so far!
I have some minor concerns about the grammar and punctuation, but that aside, this is an interesting start. At the very least, I'll have to keep an eye out for future chapters. Keep at it!
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Another story involving Spike and his wings being pulled, there was a twist however when you had the wings actually get pulled off. I’m intrigued to see how this turns out. Hopefully we see some chapters on Starlight and Discord.
Wonder how Luna feels since her and Celestia's retirement(and failure) lead to this happening?
And how this affects Discord since his plan caused this too.
I'll wait for another chapter to critique anything
So far one of the better technical written stories about Spike being maimed like this (and there have been a few).
Curious to see where this is going.
Oh my gosh, i dont kniw what to say, good job writing this.