In her dreams, it was always the same. A world of mirrors.
A gift for Snow Quill
CW: Some violence, themes of mental illness, blood
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What is the cover art suppose to be a picture of?
very interesting story, and I find that this fic reminds me of a very common quote/trope
"You stare into the abyss, and find that it stares back"
Or possibly the simple trope of 'gazing into eternity'? either way was a fun short read, have a like!
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It was generated by an AI, I'm guessing one that takes keywords as an input
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Probably Wombo
I had the same idea
That was....that was raw. You've done it again, Seer.
Entonces... Celestia no puede soportar el no saber que podria deparar el futuro... o era el pasado? Irónicamente... no lo recuerdo... porque es tan... difícil... recordar? ... yo... necesito saber, Necesito Recordar... pero es tan difícil... y duele duele mucho recordar... pero necesito recordar...yo... Yo necesito recordar, porque es importante, porque debo saberlo, porque necesito evitarlo, resolverlo porque, si no lo hago... ¿quien lo hará?¿...que era eso que necesitaba desesperadamente recordar?
Maybe (Definitely) I'm just stupid, but I feel like this is one of those iceberg stories where the 'point' is only ever hinted at. I was definitely distracted at first by the shock value, and red bold gore, and messing with grammar, and the mystery of the appearing mirrors. Gosh, the 'point' is so obvious in retrospect. Now rereading it, it literally tells you the point at least once in every 'section'. It might frustrate me to have to pay attention to understand a story, but thank you for forcing me to think.
This was a wonderfully evocative way to depict being stuck in indecision, self-doubt, and panic, where it can feel like pain and destruction is the only way out. As another commenter noted, this felt especially raw. Usually colored text feels gimmicky, but it was used fantastically here.
gr8 story!!
when i got 2 the part in the r3d it reminded me of 'my body's made of crushed little stars' by mitski..
MITSKI FAN 4 LYFE!!!!!
God this story…It hits just as hard and deeply as the first time I read it. I can’t express how much I dearly love this story. You did an absolutely fabulous job, especially because I know I gave you a pretty vague prompt XD
Thanks for much for this seer, this is another one that I’m gonna keep coming back to.
I adore your particular brand of unreal horror and this was another tour de force. Great work.
Excellent story, Seer.
Howdy, hi~!
This was absolutely stellar. I love the powerful imagery and emotions that run through the entire story as Celestia begins to unravel. The idea of mirrors and visions through time as she tries to find some measure of guilt in her actions or mistakes she's made or wrongs she's done to others... it borders obsessive and really hits an interesting note. Banger fic, definitely going to stick with me.
Thanks for the read~!
This was excellent! Pungent! A vivid portrayel of mental illness. Prose was especially fine.