"Now that are safe, I have some questions for you." She said, her voice calm and curious.

There should be a you or we here.

"I'm afraid that secret is going to have to keep hidden. However, I don't mind you exploring the Forest of your own free will. But be warned, the dangers of the forest will not stop just because you're with me. Few dare to attack me at my home." She said.

stay would sound better.

"Yes, it was to live the castle up. It's my home now until the princess can find a way to get us home." Biollante said.

liven

"My new body requests I eat some food. Through, I only need the sun and some water, I eat to help me feel less hungry during the days there is no sun." Biollante said.

Though

Through confuse on what Biollante meant by carrying a soul of something else, she did take notice on how well the food was grown. She might know a lot about Forests, but that doesn't mean she only studies them. She knew that some of the food grew in Forests and other places. Ponies help or not.

Same as above

"Where are you from?" She asked.

"Huh? Oh! Manehattan." She said.

While it isn't so bad here, it can get confusing if there are more than 2 people talking. This would be better.

"Where are you from?" She asked.

"Huh? Oh! Manehattan." Forest Lover answered.

"Yeah, my father is not happy about my cutie mark or my love for trees. He's a city pony though and though. He finds that trees and forests are just a waste of space and need to be removed for more ponies to build homes. But father forgets that the forests are part of our daily life. But he doesn't listen. I have tried to get him to understand, but he refuses to hear me out. Even Mom wasn't against forests that much! At least she understands that forests are a part of life!" Forest Lover said, telling her the truth.

through and through and while it's not wrong, using said at the end of every speech can get repetitive, saying Forest Lover told her would have sounded better.

"He will learn why I'm the oldest of Godzilla Senior, King of the Monsters!" She roars.

child should be between here.

She couldn't believe it. She met the sister of Godzilla! The Hero of Canerlot! And like Godzilla, she was a creature known as a kaiju. After moving away from the tropic of her family, Forest Lover got to see another side of Biollante. She was really kind and didn't mind company, even though she prefers to be alone. As long as you respect nature, you were safe. If you don't, then she will give you her wrath.

topic

What a sweet medley. I made not know the words, but I can tell they're something that eases a troubled soul. Was that you, Biollante? Forest Lover thought.

Melody and may

Also, wonder who the three hidden kaiju are, one was a changeling... Megaguirus maybe? Or maybe the Muto would make more sense? Don't actuelly answer, I want to be suprised.

11161414 Thank you. Honestly, I keep getting "though" and "through" mix up. I mention before I added Grammarly to my laptop, but it fails to point out all the mistakes I made. Which is why I don't always catch them first.

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Always happy to help.

When is next chapter?

I really enjoyed the dialogue in this one. Hoping Forest Lover visits Biollante again. She does seem kind of nervous about the whole Kaiju thing though. But that's to be expected I mean who wouldn't be. Lol. I would like to see Anguirus Rodan and Mothra visit her at some point. And that song at the end. Is it the same one from FallenAngels comic on deviantART? Well I'm pretty sure you're busy but I'm hoping for a new chapter soon whenever you get time. Thanks again.

Hey, your story is already a year old, I was liking it, what happened? was it canceled?