"Don't worry about a thing! I have faced the dangers of the Forests before! There's nothing I can handle!" She said, smirking.
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I feel the chapters should be a bit longer. With the passing it's currently going, it's kind of hard to give a comment about anything that has happened so far. Not because nothing is happening, but because there isn't enough context to really absorb and try to start a conversation about. If the chapters were longer, with a bit more character interactions and such, it could make people want to leave comments and start talking more.
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I feel the chapters should be a bit longer. With the passing it's currently going, it's kind of hard to give a comment about anything that has happened so far. Not because nothing is happening, but because there isn't enough context to really absorb and try to start a conversation about. If the chapters were longer, with a bit more character interactions and such, it could make people want to leave comments and start talking more.
I like that you remembered one of the Hydra’s heads is dimwitted.
Ok. I like this chapter. A little short. But I still enjoy it. And you got your own OC. And I can easily see Forest Lover and Biollante getting along.