Raven finds himself in a world with talking ponies, bug pony queens who wants a piece of him, a sea horse who wants tacos, and singing... There could have been worse places to end up at.
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Starlight don't be a hypocrite you have your cutie mark if you're going to be equal you must not have yours
Amber is too darn cute for words. You're definitely succeeding creating the"daaaaaw"s
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It sounds a bit repeating, The matrix for the spell sounds a bit better.
Discord and Shining Armor
Said evil spirits twice.
Entire what burned?
A pretty chill chapter with small amount of progress and character building. I would recommend that the next chapter should have something more important happen, just so that the fic doesn’t slow down too much and lose focus.
Also, I’m the type of author that’s a perfectionist when I write. Meaning, if I don’t find what I’ve written enjoyable or satisfying, then I won’t post it. Which is why I enjoy helping like this. I always read through my chapters two or three times. First, to see if I enjoyed what I read. Second, to look for mistakes or errors, and a third to see if I liked the fixed result. This may be repeated more than once, which is why I’m so slow with updating my own stories.
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yeah it was more of a chill chapter, but it was rather important. Raven fullied his promise to Amber.
But yeah things will ramp up next chapter
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Really well done by the way with the description on how it felt to use magic. The image of her having to remember the rune in her head, followed by finding the fuel, ignite and then cast it, was really cool.
Forgot to mention it.
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Thank you! I was inspired by the fallout Equestria fics and the first law of magic by Jest. And a bit by Prey and a Lamb by Lambs Prey. The last fic is especially good.
Good for Amber. She finally learned a new skill.
On the side note: You said Pray and Lamb, right? Look up Chirin’s Bell for image of Chirin’s monster form, and I’ll tell you what I think of it. Please, as a request?
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Oh yeah, I remember watching the movie, and chirin’s monster form is pretty awesome!
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But it's what she does best.