Raven finds himself in a world with talking ponies, bug pony queens who wants a piece of him, a sea horse who wants tacos, and singing... There could have been worse places to end up at.
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How many chapters long will this story be?
11191338
Hard to say really, I have an out line but, if I had to make a guess. But hopefully under 900k words, but I can’t make any promises.
The Black Crowes I think you stick with the outcasts. Remove your clothes slowly your sick little f****** Queen you know that dance for me grind that hot Humana ass against my face what the f*** kind of sick Queen is this come on bring it pound me and my plot. I still say he should take any offer I wonder what the foal first words going to be
11191406
Black crows stay.
Also i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/002/024/195/029
I will miss the name Outcasts, but the Black Crows have a nice ring to them.
Time to bring down the defeated Queen. No magic, that's fine for Raven and his swordsmanship.
It was interesting to see Raven's feelings through Ambrosia.
Nice interaction he had with Xeuz, and admitting that while justified, it still didn't make it right.
I don't think Celly and Lulu will appreciate a decapitated head, but if he presents Chrysalis to them in chains, that would be a good start.
My personal view on the Wedding invasion, was an act of desperation. While the theory of multiple Queens existing was never confirmed in the show, it would make sense if there were. But also, considering how violent Chrysalis is, she mostly likely was not in an alliance with the other Queens and the ponies prior to the invasion didn't know that changelings existed. I believe that the invasion was done because Chrysalis hive was going through a famine and she became reckless because of it. The ponies most likely thought that all changelings were allied with Chrysalis and thus, all changelings from all hives suffered because of Chrysalis failure.
After her failure, it would make sense that the other hives would resent Chrysalis for her actions, but I also can't fault her if the invasion was indeed a desperate move because her hive was starving. Judging by the high number that Ambrosia gave us, this is most likely the case. More changeling means that they need more food.
It probably would be better if Raven gave Chrysalis over in chains, instead of her head. Also, will Celestia and Luna meet Starswirl and the Pillars? I think they're in the same hospital.
raven will also ask for alliance with the other queens ?????
11191755
Thank you for the advice and yes the pillars are in the same hospital as Luna. Will be getting to that next chapter
11191756
We’ll see
11191755
11191785
Why give them Chrysalis at all?
Why fight Chrysalis at all and waste changelings lives?
He has the potential to access knowledge to stop their starvation and maybe many more.
Essentially why create splinters and conflict between changeling race when there is the potential of unification?
My suggestion is to do something like that
Then he won't have an alliance with some queens,with some even questionable alliance, but whole changeling race
Also, Chrysalis may be in a state that would require fear and intimidation to open her eyes but it should be possible.Especially if he will get access to emotion production and other stuff
Or even better bring in an artillery and other machines of war, and show off how it can destroy a mountain
11191842
Because, Chrysalis is labeled as an enemy of Equestria, while the other Queens are not.
An alliance with the other Queens makes sense since, as far as we know, they haven't done anything like what Chrysalis has. Giving her to Equestria would be a form of peace treaty to show that Raven don't want trouble with the Princesses and it would also help in clearing up the changelings and show that not all of them are from Chrysalis' hive. It could also help in clearing any wounds that he's made so far, and hopefully Starswirl and the Pillars can be there to vouch for him.
11191786
see after I read the last chapter it came to my mind.
also if the group of outcasts will be called "the black crows" you know what a perfect logo for their group would be that of the raven empire of the mobile game "warpath"
The Black Crows, eh? That’s much better than outcasts.
Plus, the whole ‘bring Chrysalis’ head to the alicorns’ seems a bit harsh. If you do that, Celestia will hunt Raven to the ends of Equss and back.
Also, I agree on allying with the Honeycomb hive. Mainly because there is something in it for Raven as well.
Oh, and thanks on not showing the sex scene. Not that I have anything against this, just don’t want anything to do with that lustful queen.
11192270
Raven is taking care of 7 children and 1 minor. Just woke up and found out that humanity has been wiped out, and still Carries the guilty of his fallen comrades and fiancé. Sex is the last thing on the list for him. You’ll see his lust flare up from time to time but that’s it for now.
Found this and thought it was funny preview.redd.it/fgr2tpvy2za41.jpg?width=640&crop=smart&auto=webp&s=0be7e9e6a9751951e38a8586b5ab56d9f772caa6
Is he going to have a base of operations?
11194324
Yes, and it'll be a place you might like.
Next update might take another 2 days, having issues with the internet.
I never played Elsword before so if that base of operation is related to that, I have no idea what it is
11195041
No, it’s more related to mlp than anything else.