Raven finds himself in a world with talking ponies, bug pony queens who wants a piece of him, a sea horse who wants tacos, and singing... There could have been worse places to end up at.
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Yoo I love the Twi look, and that Queen is shooting hee shot really early!
I would take the offer she's getting ready
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And damn! Ambrosia just went straight for it, loved the Outcast's reaction. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Horrorcorn Twi looks awesome!
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nice chapter can't wait to see how it continues.
also beautiful the drawing of twilight horrorcorn you should put more drawings if it would be so beautiful ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป
It's been nice to get some context with the beginning of the chapter, and looked at an image of Luciel, and she does look like little-sister material. Wouldn't have known she's a demon lord.
Is that voice inside his head his dead wife? Maybe not the real one but a voice his own mind created? The voice seemed to have known about the new ability Revan used.
Revan having magical resistances doesn't surprise me, but a nice touch nonetheless. I feel that when the Sirens try to charm him, it won't work because he's already deeply in love with someone else.
Amber and Jade are so pure and innocent, which is funny that Cozy Glow knows what's happening and is disgusted by it like Olly.
Is Ambrosia and her changelings going to join the Outsiders? It would offer more protection and knowledge of the outside world.
This story is pretty good. Binged it all in one sitting
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Really happy that youโre enjoying it!
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Felt the need to read a new story and this one caught my eye
Cool pic of Twilightโs new form. Also, can we see what is going on with her and Celestia next chapter? Donโt want to see what happens next with Raven in his situation you know.
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Unfortunately that will be after I post the next chapter. Sorry
Horrorcorn Twi is fucking badass.
When I read this I thought of skyrim with the paralysis poison ingredients lol.
Tartarus
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Agreed but you have to admit in a kind of discordish way she kinda adorable
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She needs a hug.
And ice cream.
And the kinda stuff Ambrosia wanted to do with Raven.