Mother-Daughter Date

Zipp is alone once again on Hearts and Hooves Day. So is her mom.

(Couldn't find a good wholesome image of just Zipp and Haven together, this is the closest I could get, LOL.)

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KingSombraTheTyrantRuler

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler #1 · Feb 15th, 2022 · 4 · 1 ·

I loved this; it was great!

twidash1993

twidash1993 #2 · Feb 15th, 2022 · 3 · ·

What's the secret?

Lexiebommel10

Lexiebommel10 #3 · Feb 15th, 2022 · 2 · ·

Very real tension :)

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Mica

Mica #5 · Feb 15th, 2022 · 5 · ·

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I tried to write the story in such a way that the secret is ambiguous. It's up to you as the reader to decide the things about yourself that you see in Zipp. I tried to hint this in the ending authors note.

NavelColt

NavelColt #6 · Feb 15th, 2022 · 4 · ·

Interesting, and nice to see more stories involving Haven. Admittedly I missed the 'Zipp is a science nerd' observation scene from the movie the first two times I watched it, so I'm still surprised to see how alone I was in that apparently.

Nice job.

Dashie04

Dashie04 #7 · Feb 15th, 2022 · 3 · ·

I love the little implications about what the secret is. What the secret is likely to be aside, I can’t help but wonder how her mother found out.

Boltstrike58

Boltstrike58 #8 · Feb 15th, 2022 · · ·

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Ah. Okay.

Lurks-no-More

Lurks-no-More #9 · Feb 16th, 2022 · 3 · ·

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Zipp is secretly a unicorn.

scifipony

scifipony #10 · Feb 16th, 2022 · 3 · ·

This was normal.

Elocution and eloquence. I enjoyed that. You know your craft. You get an up-vote.

Mica

Mica #11 · Feb 18th, 2022 · · ·

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Thanks so much!

howard035

howard035 #12 · Feb 18th, 2022 · 3 · ·

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Zipp is actually 3 winged dogs in a trenchcoat.

Frustration in Excelsis

Frustration in Excelsis #13 · Mar 4th, 2022 · 8 · 4 ·

... I have the nagging feeling that Zipp's secret is that she's a trans stallion -- that would explain the reaction to her full name -- but I can't say I'm quite confident enough to stick with this.

Ghost Mike