Just a lady who likes to write and have fun. I really love to read.
This story is about a young blind filly who is found in an abandon house by a young colt named Cloud Hunter and their adventure together as they try to find out who she is, where she came from, what her cutie mark means, and what this darkness is that scares her so much.
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This is my first story I've done for this site and with ponies. :D I usually just use humans as characters, but I thought I'd try something new. please comment and tell me what you think.
There's several instances where you forgot to change the name Jake from the other story (that I assume you wrote as well, since the usernames match).
1273954MidnightDancer
Oh wow, i did and i even triplet checked it. thanks for letting me know and i fixed it. yes, i wrote the other one too. you on storywrite too?
1274353 No, just happened across it and it sounded familiar
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oh okay. that was the oringal, but I thought I'd use it as a base. both of the stories are going in different directions. just fyi. :)
I am EXTREAMLY looking forward to reading this. Not to sound like a jerk but i love when a main charictor has some sort of disability with their eyes or voice, i feel like it makes that character deeper and more interesting. The way you started off the story was very well done, and i have no problems with it. I hope to see much much more character expansion in the future. You sir/madam have yourself a very dedicated follower to your story. Please keep up the good work.
P.S. sorry bout my crappy spelling but it aint exactly my forte and im on a nook.