On a normal, calm day the Mane Six decided to have a get together, since they had not been together to relax for a while. During their time of relaxation, Twilight decided to show them a spell that she had been working on. However the spell goes awry and before she manages to stop it, it reaches across space and time.
Meanwhile on another planet, a young Kanisar, in the midst of a fight, gets pulled by an unknown force. In a flash his home is replaced by the vibrant colors of another world. Unhappy with the development, he has to learn how to live in this peaceful world. Unfortunately he is not a peaceful person. Will his thirst for battle be too much to handle for the ponies of Equestria? Or will their kindness change the violent visitor?
This story is a rewrite of my original "The Tale of a Lost Wolf". Several key things will be changed, main one being that while the first one happened within the shows narrative, this one will be a mix of seasons so to say. So expect this universe not to be in line with the show.
Another thing is that this story's main character is inspired by DBZ so expect several of that show's elements to be in this story.
Wait, a rewrite?! But...Hold on, I thought you said that you were done with the series!? This is...this is completely out of nowhere!
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I don't think I ever said I was done with the story, but I could be wrong. So yeah, I'm back and ready to redo the story.
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That's really great and I really love the first chapter. Though, it completely threw me off-guard to read that now Trider is serving as a gladiator for death matches for human entertainment?! Those bastards!
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I'm also glad that you never given up and restarted this story. I really loved it and...ever since you canceled the second book, I just didn't think much with the spin-off I promised or knew where to go with it so I just stopped...
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He is not a servant, he is there cause he wants to be. Beating people up all he wants, with no repercussion. Also, this is one of the major things that I changed. Humans and Kanisar are existing in a more or less stable relationship.
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I'm sorry to hear that, and I'm sorry you had to stop cause I stopped.
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It's okay. I was just sadden because you didn't like your story anymore. Your return here with a rewrite just caught me off-guard and I'm happy you're back.
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Ayyyy welcome back!
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Good to be back
Cmc getting themselves into danger for their cutie mark and ends up encountering the OC. Totally haven't seen that before
Next the mane 6 spots him and attacks him simply for being different usually Rainbow or Applejack jumping to conclusions then that conflict gets lazily and quickly resolved like nothing happens while the ponies act like he's the one that needs a lesson in friendship while their questionable behavior doesn't get brought up and they just act like holier than thou hypocritical self-righteous jerks. Yep like many hie or x from another world ends up in equestria story. I would have hoped these cliches would have died out by now but nope.
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I mean you gave a fuck enough to respond to me.
Will there be any female characters in this story who mostly or only fight using punches in this story?
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For the first part, more no than yes. But I am still figuring everything out, so that is subject to change. However in the second part of the story, there will be one.
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