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In this scenario, Lyra Heartstrings and Bonbon's marriage is having difficulties, because Bonbon tends to get lonely during Lyra's extended choir practices. And so, the married couple decides to take on a third lover in order to complete each other! The ensuing events are what transpires when Bonbon decides it should be Doris, a young librarian pegasus, who visits her candy shop every Thursday for chocolate millionaires...

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 14 )

Alright, this is cute. Added to my Tracking bookshelf!

11136079
Thanks! I just have one more chapter to revise before wrapping up Doris's "exciting lesbian weekend from Tartarus", and then I'll finally be able to write a conclusion on this thing! Then, I should probably wrap up the new Cozy Glow? There might be another Social Rejects Squad story later on down the line, and then again, there might not be? I realize this is a story about little Cozy Glow growing up, and so that could be the end of it?

11136082
do what you think is best. Lyra is just one o my favorite ponies and that fact even got me a close friend with similar views

11136085
If you're a Lyra fan, then you should adore the final chapter I'm about to revise in a couple of days... Then, I'll get to work on finishing this thing, but presently, there are two more chapters beyond the revisions that I think are necessary...

11136092
oh, for sure! I just like the design and the human fan idea..

SAy, if you don't mind me asking, could you imagine Lyra straight?

11136117
Well, in canon now, she's married to Bonbon/Sweetie Drops, the yellow earth mare, right? If she wanted a lover of a different gender, I imagine she'd need to take that up with her wife?

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naturally. Are you familiar with that background foal Tootsie Flute? She is often seen as the daughter of the 2, either through magic or adoption. Me, i took the idea of her being the biological daughter of Lyra, if you really wanna know

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Well, I mean, just because they're in a lesbian relationship doesn't mean one or both can't be bisexual? Lyra could've had a foal before she even met Bonbon, for all we know! Also, many lesbians have heterosexual sex strictly for the purpose of procreation! That also happens... Not to mention, we don't know what sort of magical genetics technologies they may have in Equestria? It could be a test tube foal? There's lots of ways this can happen if you're creative! ;)

You did good with the Title and all, i gotta read it myself to give honest Criticism. But my fanfics are well thought out in advance. You can check em out if ya want to.

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