Tailor Girl

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A noblestallion learns a valuable lesson about not judging a mare by her origins.

Inspired by Avril Lavigne's "Sk8er Boy" and me wondering what kind of fics I would have written when I was 15 if I'd been into fanfic at the time.

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He was a boy, she was a girl, can I make it any more obvious? · 30th Jan 2022 · 788 words
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This is how the story ends. · 31st Jan 2022 · 2,086 words
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daOtterGuy

daOtterGuy #1 · Mar 4th, 2022 · 5 · · This is how the story ends. ·

Howdy, hi!

This was fun! I do enjoy the comeuppance Argent recieves in this story. It was a simple setup with a good payoff. I also find it the height of egoism that he thought he could just walk in and sweep Rarity off her hooves. Welp, at least Rarity has someone better for herself.

This was a fun read, thanks~!

PhycoKrusk

PhycoKrusk #2 · Mar 4th, 2022 · 6 · · This is how the story ends. ·

I can see in my head when Argent returns home, sets the paper down in front of his parents, and walks away without a word.

Of course, we have to face facts here. How invested in the relationship was he, really, if he couldn't be bothered to fight for it even a little bit?

Xanderfox

Xanderfox #3 · Mar 4th, 2022 · · · This is how the story ends. ·

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Just another reason to kick himself, putting position above happiness.

Bahamuttone

Bahamuttone #4 · Mar 4th, 2022 · · · He was a boy, she was a girl, can I make it any more obvious? ·

stitched by her own hoof with more skill than most mares twice her mares.

Uh… what is this substituting for?

Bahamuttone

Bahamuttone #5 · Mar 4th, 2022 · 4 · · This is how the story ends. ·

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Well that depends… fifteen years prior he was about a teen…(going by the older mane six age bracket) in a traditionally bound society it may well be impossible to go against his parents wishes. And it was a relatively short romance… it had to be, as it was FIFTEEN years prior. With THAT much time in the middle and another couple assumptions (like that they would have stayed in Canterlot) Rarity would probably end up NOT be the fashionista she is nor know Twilight and… possibly there would be Nightmare Moon on the throne…

Bahamuttone