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A Wings Of Fire x MLP:FiM Crossover

[Spoiler Warning!]
This story is set in the first arc of the Wings of Fire Series, I suggest reading the first 5 books as it will follow the storyline.

(It will still be fine if you don’t but I still recommend)

This story practially replaces Equestria Girls. Some details may not line up with the original story of FiM but thats because it is an AU.


With an element of harmony stolen, Twilight is tasked to retrieve it. Unfortunately, it was taken to another world. To Twilight’s surprise, it isn’t the kind of world you would think a cute lovable pony can survive in. What can she do in this dangerous world? Can she recover her element of harmony before something catastrophic happens?

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 40 )

I've never heard of Wings of Fire but this fic looks interesting.

I just finished reading book 14. Then comes along. Thank you dear author for this great. So far its looking great. Earned my like and fave.

well, i have most of the books myself, all the main books actually, but i must register a concern here...if ur going to be following the primary storyline with only minor changes...it kinda wont work...throwing Twilight, Celestia and Sunset into the mix will set off a butterfly effect so profound, that it would be next to impossible for the story to follow the same track with only minor alterations.

Definitely an interesting premise, I loved the Wings of Fire series and I can’t wait to read more. I would just like to note that Jade Mountain isn’t in the Skywing Kingdom, and instead is south of the Sand kingdom close to the Rainforest. But that’s just me.

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Im not planning on doing minor alterations anyways.

Edit: Just to be clear, when I say it will follow the main storyline. I meant that Twilight and Celestia will be within the book’s timeline, which means it their arrival would change certain events. But if it seems that Sunset hasn’t changed much, there would be subtle changes regarding her but only because she decided to lay low. But I can guarantee it won’t be the same story.

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fair enough, i look forward to how u will portray Clay and the others...

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My excuse is that it’s an AU so the mountain range is SkyWing territory 🙃

Liking this so far. Can't wait to see where it goes

Link to the mentioned Wings of Fire series?

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Not a fanfic. Just go to amazon and look for it.

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It's a book series written by Tui T Sutherland. I've only read the first book, but I am hooked.

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Book Fifteen comes out next April, the final book of the third arc...

I'm just starting to read the graphic novels of Wing of fire and I'm join it.

. I hope you continue with the fanfiction

that ALSO means that Tsunamis other sister had to marry that squidbrain and become Blisters secret Animus weapon...thats not going to end well...

Ayy, nice choice of cover art :yay:

Ok Crane is still alive here, how did that happen?

Newbies gotta start somewhere.

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Crane originally died in a battle against the IceWings near the Diamond Spray River, but that battle didn’t happen because IceWings we're handling a battle near the Sand Kingdom.

If you didn’t notice the SandWing that was sent requesting Queen Moorhen for reinforcements since Scarlet and the SkyWings are supposedly out of the war.

Sunset also appeared surprised. That is not how magic works. What kind of magic am I working with here? “I did it…” she said weakly.

Animus magic which you want to stop using like now if you value your soul, hopefully this is just your equestrian magic and your soul is fine please please tell me her soul is fine

So spikes not coming tell me why you're not allowing the dragon to go to the dragon world, honestly I was hoping everyone was coming because I want to see what type of dragons they would all be

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Maybe 2nd arc if I have the time.

Twilight was conflicted with using her mind-reading power to find information and respecting the privacy of the mind.

Toilet how you able to control this spoilers for wings of fire book 6 moonwatcher had these powers for her entire and she cannot turn it off how are you able to turn it off you should be possibly reading everyones mind because that's how the powers worked with moonwatcher

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Basically how I see it, Twilight has studied every type of magic including telepathy. Her profieciency with magic contributes in controlling this type of power. My headcanon is that NightWings are connected to the moons, Twilight lacks that connection but uses her Equestrian magic that resides within her as a source.

I don’t want to get too specific but thats what I think.

So I don't know if I need to ask this or not, but I have a story idea that's similar to this one and the fact that the poodle leads to pyria instead of CHS, but sunsets a wall empire would be completely different my idea is that she replaces the one in the story, so it's similar enough where I'm not quite sure if I would need to ask permission because your story did inspire this and I am taking an aspect of this story so I just thought I'd ask

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Go ahead and do whatever you want. I am glad to know that it inspired something. I just really liked Sunset's character and I thought she could be more through this story. If you are taking direct inspiration from this story, you can just leave a note on yours. But other than that, go ahead.

“Come on, let's go you slow salamanders. Starlight won’t save himself.” Tsunami hollered.

I'm pretty sure you meant STAR flight not starlight, but when I first saw this I for a second I was confused wondering one straw like got here:rainbowlaugh:

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Yes Autocorrect on my phone sucks

I’m sure she would appreciate the change of pace.

And as if the world answered her, something appeared later that day, little did she know that it would change her life.

Even after Luna returned, I had to guide Equestria’s newest princess, Twilight Sparkle. Thinking too much about Sunset made her depressed, but after reuniting with Luna most of her sadness has passed. After reflecting on her past for what seemed to be forever, Celestia looked out the balcony hoping the scars of her past would fade away.

Don't mix First Person Perspective (I, me, we) and Third Person Perspective (She, her, Celestia) in regards to Celestia, or even any character

If you want to make it the thoughts of the character, just italicize or put single quote on it

Other than that, good intro so far

I remember reading the Wings of Fire series way back when it first came out and enjoying it. I'm interested to see where this goes.

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Book 15 came out not that long ago...

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You're right, but I read the first 4 or 5 books back when they first released and then stopped reading. I reread the series about a year ago and probably should again.

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its quite decent, since the third arc has all ten tribes coming together...

“Oh sorry, I’m not that good at landing yet. I don’t get much practice as I don’t fly a lot.” It was only a half-lie as she didn’t fully understand the mechanics of dragon flying.

In the same time as Equestria girls like that's where this is in the timeline, Thailand was only an alicorn for like a week maybe less he hasn't figured out exactly how to fly as a pony so it's not a lie at all,

Are the Dazzlings ever going to appear in this story?

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I don't plan to, because they are dead. I'll leave that up to you on how you interpret that.

Hey, are you going to do more

Hi, when are you going to continue the story?

Interesting
It seems these worlds had a crossover event
(Can you unhiatas it? I would love that!)

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