• Member Since 4th Sep, 2012
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Star Grazer


Just a pegasister/gamer/other gal wanting to try her hoof at writing something. Hopefully.

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The Cutie Mark Crusaders make an attempt to get their cutie marks by trying to repair a roof. It does not go as planned.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 5 )

I do like these kind of slice of life stories. Some phrasings felt a little overdone and awkard, espescially the opening lines, and you might wanna watch out for some double-spaces tough. I'm definently on board for the 2nd chapter tough. :pinkiehappy:

oh lord i can only imagine poor Carrot Top's house... i like this! do go on. :twistnerd:

really good so far
cant wait for the next chapter:twilightsmile:

Well, CMC are shenanigan magnets, so this is bound to be fun. I'll keep a close eye on it

Yay new Scootaloo story! :pinkiehappy:
I'll read this later :twilightsmile:

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