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CookieScript


Hey, guys! Name's Cookie Script, and my passions are reading, writing, cooking, and baking! I got into MLP a few years ago and I have been working on ideas for stories since then!

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A normal day in Ponyville has turned into one of chaos. Princess Twilight has gone missing and instead, Midnight Sparkle has somehow emerged from within and given Twilight a new form, that of Koragg the Dark Knight! As if things couldn't get any worse, Chrysalis has returned and is stronger than ever thanks to the Nightmare Force's abilities and a malevolent force known only as 'The Master'. With an enemy on the rise the likes of which no pony has seen before, the Elements of Harmony are useless without Twilight around, right? Not really...

Deep in the Everfree Forest, a mysterious book opens and a young mare and her cousin learn of this powerful threat of acombination, knowing that new champions are needed to save Equestria and their own Mystic Realm. Rarity, the generous fashionista; Applejack, the down to earth honest farmer; Pinkie Pie, the energetic fun-creating party pony; Fluttershy, the gentle and kind animal tamer; Rainbow Dash, the most loyal Wonderbolt you'll ever meet; Starlight Glimmer, student of Twilight Sparkle who had been redeemed for her past sins; Spike, the best assistant Twilight could have asked for and now leader of the new heroes. Together with the two magical cousins, they'll fight to protect their land from darkness and despair using courage, belief, and the light within everypony's magical heart! They are the Pony Rangers Mystic Force!

Takes place after To Change a Changeling and will include some hippogriffs.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 13 )

This is really cool.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Especially on Spike's case.


Wonder what will happen with Luna since the Nightmare Forces are involved?

oh shot, you made this story today. Awsome

That was a pretty epic battle.


Wonder if the Golem is a existing kajin or its fanmade?

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Yeah, honestly I have no idea. I haven't watched Mystic Force in YEARS, like since I was a kid and it was still on Jetix.

OK you have my attention.
PS:

Chrysalis smiled and walked over to the bat woman. "This is Sanguisa. She's one of the Morlock Generals under Octomus."

It was not supposed to be Necrolai.

This was great, I wish for the next chapters you would explore Clare and Nick more, although many already know who they are, the new Rangers should know more about them.

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On course it's not Necrolai. Sanguisa is an OC that I came up with. Since Necrolai had been redeemed in Mystic Force, I kinda had the thought of "What if she had a sister that was hidden by Octomus all that time?" That's pretty much where the idea for Sanguisa came along.

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I'm definitely thinking about doing that, as well as expanding more on the dangers of the Mystic Force magic around other ponies and Spike trying to rein in his new abilities, pun intended.

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I seen Mystic Force on ABC Kids on Saturday mornings when it aired.

Did you update the story or something since the fic appears in the Latest Updates section?

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