The Morlocks have returned, and have invaded Equestria in order to gather the magic needed to bring back their Master.
Now the Mane 7, Rainbooms and Turtles must join forces with the brave mystic rangers to face the evil that is coming. Together, they must defend their homelands and combine their magical forces to prevent their enemies from defeating them, and their worlds and any universe with magic from being destroyed.
This story is part of the TMNT/MLP extended universe created by Wildcard25
Idea approved by Wildcard25
Cover Art created by AmethystMajesty25
Chapters (3)
Quite an opening that's so intense
I wonder what plans you got for Spike in this?
Or well, both Spikes since both worlds will be involved.
Didn't know this was a sequel to another fic of yours.
That was cool! I enjoyed it! Though, you may want to edit a few spelling errors, all do respect. For one, Starwirl is a he, not she.
"Have you talked to Starswirl?" Luna asked.
"Yes, but she said it will take her a while until she has something concrete."
And, you must also change this most of all:
"What the hell are those!" asked the male pony. Suddenly, another scream erupted a few feet away, as one of those creatures cornered a mare in a corner. Without mercy, the thing grabbed her violently and, in a flash of darkness, disappeared with the mare in its hands.
Change it to something like this:
"What the hay are those?!" asked the male pony.
It is a kids story, right?
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Thank you for your comments, corrections have been made.
This is true.
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Well, they will take care of the issues of their respective worlds.
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Like actual plans for them or are they just sidelined?
(I haven't read any TMNT/MLP crossovers so I don't know how Spike is handled in that AU)
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Happy to assist!
Sunbursts should be Sunburst and Jengi should be Jenji
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thanks for the information.
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Well, at least with Dragon Spike there will be a bit more scenes since the Mystic Rangers have a dragon as well, Fireheart.
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My pleasure
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What do you mean at least?
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Which for now is what I have for them.
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So for human world Spike, he is sidelined while dragon Spike burns a few enemies but is still sidelined in the end since he's not one of the "chosen ones"?
(Again, I haven't read Wildcard25's TMNT/MLP AU yet so I have no idea how either Spike is handled in there)
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Hey, I never said Dog Spike will be left out of the story, I'm just still figuring out how to fit him into the story, that's all.
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As in as equals?
The Opening really seems promising it definitely feels great to see the stakes rising and the threat serious in that magnitude in a while, hope the next chapter isn’t far behind.
Damn if Octomus The Master will resurrect then the Turtles, Rainbooms and Mane 6 will face the Greatest Evil of Dark Magic since Kavaxus and would put Tirek, Discord, Chrysalis and Sombra combined to shame even with the Elements of Harmony, the only hope the team has to win is with the help of the Mystic Force Power Rangers.
Aside from a few grammar errors the fight scene is good.
This looks good
I am surprised about the human world cast going to Equestria.
Shouldn't we refer Sci-Twi's Spike as Sci Spike?
(In fact I wonder if Sci-Spike will get a ninja weapon since he is a dragon now?)
I do wonder what will be going on with both Spikes.
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I'm glad you liked that bet I made, the others will eventually come to Equestria, though not all of them.
I think Dog Spike sounds better for the Spike of the human world.
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Calling him Dog Spike sounds pretty demeaning to him though(hence why I don't usually call him that)
But calling him Sci Spike makes more sense since he's currently a dragon at the moment and it be awkward to calling him Dog Spike and Equestria's Spike as Dragon Spike to differentiate the two.
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Hey Danyram we haven’t heard from you in a while doing alright?
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Relax my friend, I'm fine, I've just been a bit disconnected because I've been busy with other things and I've been on vacation.
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Ok good to know.
That was a good chapter and now the two sides are friends
Nice job.
And no worries, your education is important in college, so it's understandable.
Awesome chapter! I think you need to replace one character.
It was the only mistake I found in the chapter. Cause Leo is with Sci-Twi, Dog Spike, and Donnie in the dimension they arrived together. But other than that, it was so awesome! Try adding Raph to say that line instead please.
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Ok, thanks for the comment.
Damn I can’t believe I just noticed the newest chapter just now.
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So, what did you think?
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The chapter is solid, it’s just that the grammar needs work, Overall I give it an 8/10.