Princess Celestia's best student, Sunset Shimmer loves to read books. She thinks of friends as a waste of time. She tells Celestia exactly that when the Princess Of The Sun tells her to make some friends.
She says she's already got a friend and that's enough for her....
umm...okay?
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It's just that I realized I wasn't making anything different happen- all that happened was Sunset and Sombra replacing Twilight and Spike. So I decided to make it in a way that there would be a difference.
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i see. just surprised
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Ok.
interesting idea
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Sunset's backstory?
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yes and how you build in sombra
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Thanks!
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youre welcome and i am happy your story is well reeived
I never even read the old version, but this is fantastic! Love it! Can’t wait for more chapters!
Question, why did you repeat Sunset’s story in the author’s notes? Great chapter by the way!
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Thanks for the support! I'm sure that if you read the old version you would've cringed.
(Whoops, seems like copy and paste isn't reliable at all... I use the Wattpad app as I'm able to write while offline, so I have to copy and paste the chapters. Sadly when using the mobile version of things... They don't quite come out right.)
I've fixed the error now, thanks for telling me!
PS: Sorry for writing such a long reply, I just enjoy typing too much.
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I'm happy too. Seems like I worry too much 😅
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maybe
Very nice use and nice laughing gif
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Thanks! The GIF was made using Ponytown.
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youre welcome
Awesome! Just got around to reading this! Great job
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Thanks! It seems like I spoke too soon earlier when I worried about this becoming a regularly updated one, I was going to write a chapter... And then real life happened. Now I've gotta deal with a horny budgie.
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nicely done still
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Thanks!
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youre welcome