It Was Only A Kiss

Rarity has a lot of different mannerisms. But kissing someone on the cheek? Sunset had only seen her do it a few times, and never to her. She could have written it off as a friendly gesture if her magic hadn’t flared up and caused her to see the truth behind Rarity’s actions.

Now... what the hell is Sunset feeling?

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Hakuno

Hakuno #1 · Sep 20th, 2021 · 2 · ·

Wow.

I normally don't like Sunset x Rarity ships, but this was handled beautifully, if a bit too quick. Then again, teens will always be teens, so the public make-out is nothing out of the ordinary.

Melikes.

applejackofalltrades

applejackofalltrades #2 · Sep 20th, 2021 · · ·

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Thanks! Yeah they moved a bit quick but hey I know what teenagers are like haha. Again, thanks for the nice words :>

Witty Joke

Witty Joke #3 · Sep 20th, 2021 · 2 · ·

“Well, I’d be a little surprised if we weren’t, darling,” Rarity admitted. “We did just, erm, make out in public. A bit unladylike, but I’ll make an exception just for you.” She giggled and gave Sunset a quick kiss on the cheek. It still managed to send lightning down her entire body. “That one was a thank you.”

Rarity giggled and gave Sunset a quick kiss on the cheek. It still managed to send lightning down her entire body. “That one was a thank you.”

Accidental repetition

Good stuff tho

applejackofalltrades

applejackofalltrades #4 · Sep 20th, 2021 · · ·

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whoops! i tried to move that part around and I guess I left in a double copy. thanks for pointing that out

n3k1dsk1llz

n3k1dsk1llz #5 · Sep 20th, 2021 · 1 · ·

hooo man.

this was good. like….I want them to be the OTP now. That level of good.

And it was a good depiction of Sunset’s power making the whole thing just a bit awkward. But not too awkward, because that’s not who Sunset is.

The only thing I would point out is that perhaps Rarity said “Darling” a bit too much, but it wasn’t every other sentence, so it’s fine.

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applejackofalltrades #6 · Sep 20th, 2021 · · ·

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Hey thanks! And yeah you’re right about the amount of “darling”s haha. That’s absolutely my bad. Thanks for the kind words :)

I wish THEY were OTP smh. They should have had more good moments

Shalifi

Shalifi #7 · Sep 20th, 2021 · 2 · ·

Always equestria and magic to help her grow stronger or cure the muscle loss. Great story. Or twis science

Buck Swisher

Buck Swisher #8 · Sep 20th, 2021 · 1 · ·

Know what, this was worth reading. I'm glad I did.

applejackofalltrades

applejackofalltrades #9 · Sep 20th, 2021 · · ·

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That's true! Though, ya gotta wonder how safe it'd be. Worth a shot, though. Thanks!

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applejackofalltrades #10 · Sep 20th, 2021 · · ·

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Thanks for giving it a shot :)

Buck Swisher

Buck Swisher #11 · Sep 20th, 2021 · 1 · ·

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Always, homes.

Vaguely Demented

Vaguely Demented #12 · Sep 21st, 2021 · 1 · ·

Nice bit of fluff.

Gavier

Gavier #13 · Sep 21st, 2021 · 2 · ·

I tought this was the pants story, and was surprised to see it on the featured box again─ And even more surprised when it wasn't!

Good story for a good ship, and just in time for Sunset Day!

applejackofalltrades

applejackofalltrades #14 · Sep 21st, 2021 · · ·

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Haha thanks! I’m pleasantly surprised to see you recognized the cover style, and I assume you read Stupid Rarity as well. Thanks for the kind words! And yeah! That was perfect timing, if completely unintentional

Sunset Shimmer The Great

Sunset Shimmer The Great #15 · Jul 25th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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As a teenager, can confirm.

I hate SunsetxRarity but I remember stumbling across this gem a couple of years ago and still like it. Nice piece of floof.

applejackofalltrades

applejackofalltrades #16 · Aug 23rd, 2022 · · ·

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The ship’s not for everyone :P I know lots of people don’t like it, but hey thanks for giving the story a shot anyway :)

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #17 · Jan 29th, 2023 · · ·

The ringing of the bell punctuated her sentence. Sunset banged her forehead on her locker once more before rushing to her class. "Never thought I'd wish to be Rainbow Dash , either."

Oof.

The way she enunciated her name made Sunset's inside turn over. Despite barely being able to feel herself, Sunset reached for the box and took it from Rarity. Shockwaves trailed down her hands as their fingers brushed against each other. "Thanks, Rarity. I'm glad you're back now."

I wonder where she was prior to this? Out of town for something important or fashion related?

Sunset considered lying, maybe save Rarity some trouble, but Applejack would definitely punch her in the face if she found out. And getting punched in the face by Applejack is not exactly something anyone would want to experience twice. Plus, she sort of wanted Rarity to know that she knew.

I'd hate to get punched by her!

It quickly became Sunset’s favourite game to see how red she could make Rarity blush. Judging by the deep red her face had become, Sunset marked it as a new record. “Oh, you know,” Rarity stammered, “just some party games here and there. Nothing uncouth.”

https://m.

“Well, I’d be a little surprised if we weren’t, darling,” Rarity admitted. “We did just, erm, make out in public. A bit unladylike, but I’ll make an exception just for you.”

Congrats girls!