He was sleeping in bed and now he woke up in Equestria, now he needs to survive and with his climbing abilities. What new unexpected terms will show in his a new life in Equestria.
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You need to do a lot more practice writing, but there's some ideas here that are good and it's very nice to see someone write something besides and awkward adolescent power fantasy. Good luck!
Other than the tedious sentences and a few grammar issues, is gud. Keep at it friend. 👍
Before i’ve read this, my hooves are that this is suction cup man
I would suggest trying to get someone to edit your writing for you. There are a few grammatical errors, and a LOT of run-on sentences. Other than that, the fic seems alright.