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Help! I’m on fire! -kirin joke

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I'm going to finish writing my story for the event (to be fair) before reading this one, but thank you for the story! :twilightsmile:

Loved the adorable story

Very well done, I love it!

Minuette’s movements were like a ninja. Well, a ninja that didn’t practice very often and learned all her moves from manga. Still, she zipped and zagged behind various objects for cover. After a while of these sort of antics, she looked behind her to find Moondancer wasn’t doing it at all.

This has to be the best description of an incompetent sneak mission I've seen in a long while. Story is off to a great start.

She normally rambled about things that the book mare would rather not even think about. Who cared which Wonderbolt liked mares? Moondancer didn’t want to know that Twilight was bi. And Lyra and Bon Bon seemed to be Minuette’s heroes.

I'm noticing a pattern here.

“Explain the science behind it,” Moondancer demanded.

Finally taking charge I see.

This was the very definition of short and sweet. I love the language you used, and that it was tailored to each pony.

Well, that’s the most unique sex wordplay I’ve seen in a good while. Bravo.

I adore how this doesn't really explain why her breath was minty. Kudos for the attention to detail:twilightsheepish:

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