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TheVClaw


I'm a shameless neckbeard who has a knack for writing a LOT of smut. I have an Official Patreon page (Patreon.com/TheVClaw), and I also take commissions to help support myself as a freelance writer.

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This story is a sequel to Unfamiliar Patterns


It's only been a couple weeks since Rarity found the courage to come out of the stable, and confess to her friends that she was currently in a loving relationship with Zecora. Fortunately, despite how surprising such a paring may have been, all of the Elements (and even Spike, shockingly enough) were all supportive of the fashionista and apothecary being together. However, now the unicorn has to face an even larger obstacle which has her fur standing on end:

Coming out to her family.

Sure, Zecora might not be feared by the citizens of Ponyville anymore. And Rarity highly doubted that her parents or sister would be too upset about Rarity having a girlfriend. But at the same time, the Element of Generosity could only hope that things would go smoothly when she invites them over for dinner...

Note: This story was commissioned by SOMBert on Discord, as well as my proofreader Double R. Forrest. If you want to help contribute to future stories, or see what else I have planned in upcoming months, please feel free to follow me on my Official Patreon page: https://www.patreon.com/TheVClaw

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very cute, well done!

“Well, I just mean… Ever since you became the Element of Generosity, the two of us sorta… Well, we expected that you wouldn’t be trying to date anypony at all until you guys retired.”

“And since we had no idea when that would be,” added Magnum, “all we could do was hope that… well… maybe having those Element friends of yours would help you be more honest about yourself. Heck, part of me wouldn’t have been surprised if you ended up with one of them instead.”

“Oh, EWWW!” Rarity had to push her plate away. “Dad, they’re like my sisters!”

“I know, I know! I’m sorry, I’m not saying I wanted that to happen! Just that, well… it wouldn’t have been too much of a shock, y’know?”

Rarity shuddered uncomfortably, causing her Father’s ears to slump down in guilt. Pearl spoke on his behalf with a reassuring smile. “What we’re trying to say is… For a long time, your father and I were worried that you’d spend the prime years of your life alone. And before you say anything, we wouldn’t have been upset at all if that turned out to be the case.”

* Looking at the MANY, MANY, MANY Stories of the Mane Six pairing up with each other, or make a harem together in the vast MLP Fanfiction Multiverse *

Me ( and everyone else ) saying this to Rarity:

memegenerator.net/img/instances/60776852/oh-you-have-no-idea.jpg

Whoa, major blast from the past! I never expected this to come back. It was a fun bit of crack shipping back in the day.

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>Heck, part of me wouldn’t have been surprised if you ended up with one of them instead.
Applejack pulls the brim of her hat down over her face. "Partner, you ain't the only one."
>“Oh, EWWW!” Rarity had to push her plate away. “Dad, they’re like my sisters!”
Sweetie Belle sighs and stares despondantly at her plate. "So much for Cutie Mark Crusaders Incest Havers."
>For a long time, your father and I were worried that you’d spend the prime years of your life alone.
And then canon happened.

“Oh! Of course not!” Rarity exclaimed. “That was back before I even knew he was her brother.

Wait, when did Rarity even hear about him before Twilight broke into song about her BBBFF?

“And the answer is NO, Applejack. Zecora’s tongue is not ‘three times longer’ than a pony’s. I don’t know why Rainbow would even assume such a thing.”

Rainbow must be confusing Zecora with Pinkie Pie. Have you seen her eat cake?

“But to answer your question, I suppose my rhyming is... unique . Back in my homeland, I didn’t need to rhyme so often to speak. But when I moved to Equestria, learning Ponish was quite tough. I tried to raise bits for textbooks, but I could never have enough. So instead, I learned Ponish through music records and poetry. By the time I learned enough, rhyming was second nature to me.”

That actually makes some sense. I have always found understanding lyrics in foreign languages to be significantly easier than understanding casual speech.

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Good enough for me. Headcanon accepted.

Yes!!!!!!!!! Been waiting for a sequel.

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You have been waiting eight years? Do you think this is a sign that Half-Life 3 is about to drop?

Another amazing story as usual! Your stories make me cry and laugh out loud.:twilightsmile:

Only recently discovered the original and was delighted to learn upon finishing that there was even a followup. You've got a very clean writing style, almost to a fault but I still enjoyed it throughly. I've honestly assumed that if my wife and I ever had a kid and they did the dramatic coming out to us it would end similarly. Very fun, both the original and this.

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