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This was personally really good. I would hope you would enjoy writing stories with Spike in them and do some more after this. I loved how you did my fav pairing. Sparity seems so rare now a days so it was a great read.
Thanks for the read, I enjoyed it I'd have to agree with DragonPony on the fact that I don't see many Sparity stories anymore. As I'm a big Spike fan & love Sparity if you do write some more I'd love to read them Thanks for the story
Oooooh yeah I enjoyed this! Thank you again!!!
cornilingus is my new favorite word and I am stealing it
Excellent excellent work. I could really learn a thing or two from this. The dialogue of every character, even the brief ones, fits their show mannerisms to a T. I tend to write as if I am the one speaking every part, but you've masterfully crafted the dialogue to feel true to the show, and even used euphamisms I wouldn't have thought to use.
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Glad to hear it.
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Clearly the best term for the act.
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One of the more important questions for keeping dialogue in character is "Can I imagine the character saying that?" And if you can't, how do you think they'd say it? (If you don't think they'd express the idea at all, you have bigger problems.)
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Same.
Good old fashioned Sparity with some wonderful character moments! While the sex itself was a bit short and lacked detail, you made up for it with one of my favorite things that so rarely appears; conversation mid coitus.
Stellar work!
Always love me some Sparity, nice work
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I'll be honest with ya, I cared more about the Sparity romance than the clop itself, lol.
This story exchange was my best chance of getting a Sparity without paying money, hahaha.
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As an OG Sparity shipper, I can respect that.
An excellent Sparity story; you successfully present them as lovers, and not just people (ponies/dragons) having sex. Bonus points for the cornilingus and horngasm!
I loved this so much . Thank you so much!
Love this Sparity fic!
That... was a really good story. I appreciate how it stayed relatively... grounded, if you know what I mean? And their interactions with each other were dripping with love and care and warmth, it was heart-warming, really. Which, in turn, made the sex scene more... relevant. It was great.
Thank you.