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Mica


I write well when I am brave enough to speak my mind. Soy milk fund

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Cozy Glow is a masterful singer. If she sings the correct sequence of music notes, she can make you cry.

(Cozy Glow first-person POV. Most of this was written on Friday night in about 2 hours.)

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If she sings the correct sequence of music notes, she can make you cry.

It’s not that, it’s the batch of home-baked cookies she bribed me with.

Of course, this doesn't change fact that Cozy was an unreedmable cunt who got what she deserved. Twice.

Great story though 😁.

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Gurl

jmj
jmj #4 · Jul 3rd, 2021 · · ·

Fun story!

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No child should experience what happened to Cozy Glow.

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No child should do to others what Cozy Glow did.

Good story. Nice look at her inner thoughts.

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Truth. That poor filly deserved better.

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Doesn't matter what she did.

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It does. In real life, children who tried to kill people (like Cozy did) were locked away. Age does not absolve them of punishment.

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That "poor filly" trapped Starlight, tricked her teachers into getting locked up in Tartarus, and had no problem letting her fellow students get dragged into a void.

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Okay, guys, I know Cozy's fate is a hot-button topic — and understandably so — but seeing as we all know there's only one possible way this argument can end, I think it's best we call it off now before it clogs up Mica's inbox and overshadows the story itself. The time ain't right for fighting in the street.

Fascinating and compelling. Cash Money.

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dawwww you're sweet. :twilightsmile:
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Glad you liked it! What is "Cash Money?" :rainbowhuh:
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Thanks!
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but i'm a guy :rainbowlaugh:

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https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Cash-Money there ya go! it's good I promise lol. it just means you get to go on the good shelf.

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Haha, I feel old now.

A detailed, methodical little story, and I got to learn a fun fact about you! Another fine job, Mica.

I can imagine her performing a masterful rendition of Gloomy Sunday.

oh my gosh, i don't think i've ever related so much to a villain than i did with this story!
(spoilers below)

As a person with ASD, i struggle with social interactions in the same way Cozy does. Emotions are so much trickier than facts and knowledge, too difficult to navigate in real-time. I often feel like I'll never be able to fit in, all because of my struggles with reading emotions.
Music (and theater) were the only things I could rely on when I was younger, so seeing Cozy use music to overcome some of her difficulty with emotional processing hit very close to home.

Aww! Anti-social Cozy is best Cozy! :heart:

Great work with this!

Such a wonderful description of sociopathic way of thinking.
...if there is a thing I deeply despise in the mlp - it is the pony child made being a sociopath. Yes, it is something from real life. But... maybe that magical world of technicolor ponies can live without sociopaths? :-(((

This was an excellent and immersive dive into the motivations of a character who clearly feels thoroughly alone in the world. All the smatterings of what would manipulate a mentally ill child to attempt to tackle very adult villainy are littered throughout this very naturally. Your ability for capturing this level of disturbance in character voice is one of my favorite things to see in your stories. The subtle references to this being in continuity with My Sister, Cozy Glow had me smiling too. Very clever, and I hope to see the sister story (hah) update one day too.

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Thank you for the high praise. Glad you enjoyed reading!

My Sister, Cozy Glow

a.k.a. My Problem Child of a Story
I do go back to the story periodically, but I can never get an ending I'm satisfied with.

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If you ever need a prereader, I'd be happy to help.

Groovy story. I'm a sucker for anything with Cozy Glow, and I like this concept of how her brainmeat works.

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