After being sent to Zebrica as a military advisor, Midnight ends up getting dragged by three zebra mares who want to give him a good time. Will he satisfy them, and how will he react when he finds out the secret of who they are?
10968913 Yep. I was thinking about using a trio of other zebras (which Shadowpony300 originally requested, the ones from a picture with Shining), but I don't know their personalities at all. Here, these zeebs are mine, and I understand their personality. Took a few minutes searching names. Zuri as you know means Beautiful and Tisha means Innocent (though this is ironic given her personality).
So yeah, these Zebra OCs are mine. Zuri, Tisha, the King, and a third zebra.
10969051 I'm assuming that since Equestria's military is competent enough to begin teaching other nations, it means that Shining has enough time to see Midnight's extreme innocence and explain what sex is.
When I say "really". I was talking about that you didn't mind letting us use your original characters in our potential stories. And I was surprised by that, and want to make sure to confirm that.
10969396 Yeah. It's an open deal. Met Sharaz while they were submitting stories in a contest, then I was able to submit Midnight when they announced Planet of the OCs (a little vacation for their own OC). From there Midnight became part of the gang, and any OC related to him that they wanted to use, like Moonlight from NNN, they can use.
Midnight also has appeared in other stories. Some were submission contests and others people asked me for.
Okay, I had to avoid the comments section for obvious reasons, but leaving that aside. Let's go to history.
This chapter was better in terms of comedy, certainly our protagonist has a very significant change in the way of thinking about him. I can repeat that certainly, before coming to the kingdom of the Zebras, Midnight, he had to have some moderately sexual or slightly committed encounter with something related to the sexual. He left this, due to the fact that he tries at all costs to avoid his "lustful state" as if he knows that he can hurt or is too powerful for him since he is out of control or out of control. . That would explain all his attempts to control himself even in the most difficult moments.
At the moment I'm more caught up in the backstory, what will happen to the King of the Zebras, and the role that Midnight will play when he meets this King.
I would find it even funnier and super hilarious that King Zabra has an extremely beautiful female and she is the one who tries to seduce Midnight, or in the other case, that she finds out about the sexual abilities and the length size of the pegasus , for the Zebras that star in this story.
In any case it will be fun.
And to accentuate. My favorite part was when he gets stuck in the bathroom XD.
10969517 At the end there will be a very big surprise for everyone.
And well I guess you can consider this Midnight a workaholic. Also Shining probably has explained what sex was to him given the military is competent enough to help others. Anything that gets in the way of progress is an obstacle. He's afraid of ruining things because of his lust. So yeah you can say you're correct in your assumption.
That was close.
10968775
Yep. You find this chapter interesting?
10968776
Yes
10968778
Thanks!
awesome chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter
How do you feel about the reverse ryona fetish?
10968812
thanks!
10968813
what is that?
A slightly less innocent Midnight!
10968888
Yep, and he already has those urges.
Pop quiz! Can you remember where Midnight's dialogue changes from 'this' to 'this' or 'this' in another story?
10968889
Nope.
10968902
Answer: A Change In View
Anything you wanted to ask, question, comment about something else? Maybe the lore, etc?
10968910
Did you create these zebra OCs?
10968913
Yep. I was thinking about using a trio of other zebras (which Shadowpony300 originally requested, the ones from a picture with Shining), but I don't know their personalities at all. Here, these zeebs are mine, and I understand their personality. Took a few minutes searching names. Zuri as you know means Beautiful and Tisha means Innocent (though this is ironic given her personality).
So yeah, these Zebra OCs are mine. Zuri, Tisha, the King, and a third zebra.
10968918
Ah, cool, more expansion of your lore!
10968930
Yep!
Of course, they only exist, or at least prominently exist should the Zebra Tribes Unite into the Zebrican Empire.
I guess if you want these OCs can also be yours, just like Midnight, Moonlight, and the rest are
10968938
Cool, maybe I'll borrow them down the line.
10968938
Really?!
Hopefully, later down in the story. When the sex time comes. There will be some good Boobjob, Blowjob, and Cheampie action.
Oh dear. But interesting. Wonder what Was his past in terms of staying pure
10968955
Ye
10969051
I'm assuming that since Equestria's military is competent enough to begin teaching other nations, it means that Shining has enough time to see Midnight's extreme innocence and explain what sex is.
10969030
What does the really mean.
And yeah, expect all of this in the future.
10969379
Good point.
10969381
Ye. Any more questions?
10969382
Not really, only if moonlight exists here
10969383
Hmmm... Probably not. Midnight mentioned he didn't have friends, so she probably doesn't exist.
10969389
Okay
10969380
When I say "really". I was talking about that you didn't mind letting us use your original characters in our potential stories. And I was surprised by that, and want to make sure to confirm that.
Awesome!
10969396
Yeah. It's an open deal. Met Sharaz while they were submitting stories in a contest, then I was able to submit Midnight when they announced Planet of the OCs (a little vacation for their own OC). From there Midnight became part of the gang, and any OC related to him that they wanted to use, like Moonlight from NNN, they can use.
Midnight also has appeared in other stories. Some were submission contests and others people asked me for.
Okay, I had to avoid the comments section for obvious reasons, but leaving that aside. Let's go to history.
This chapter was better in terms of comedy, certainly our protagonist has a very significant change in the way of thinking about him. I can repeat that certainly, before coming to the kingdom of the Zebras, Midnight, he had to have some moderately sexual or slightly committed encounter with something related to the sexual. He left this, due to the fact that he tries at all costs to avoid his "lustful state" as if he knows that he can hurt or is too powerful for him since he is out of control or out of control. .
That would explain all his attempts to control himself even in the most difficult moments.
At the moment I'm more caught up in the backstory, what will happen to the King of the Zebras, and the role that Midnight will play when he meets this King.
I would find it even funnier and super hilarious that King Zabra has an extremely beautiful female and she is the one who tries to seduce Midnight, or in the other case, that she finds out about the sexual abilities and the length size of the pegasus , for the Zebras that star in this story.
In any case it will be fun.
And to accentuate. My favorite part was when he gets stuck in the bathroom XD.
10969517
At the end there will be a very big surprise for everyone.
And well I guess you can consider this Midnight a workaholic. Also Shining probably has explained what sex was to him given the military is competent enough to help others. Anything that gets in the way of progress is an obstacle. He's afraid of ruining things because of his lust. So yeah you can say you're correct in your assumption.
10969524
Oh, so our protagonist is a bolt bomb? Who activates it should be dealing with the problem? I like that
10969530
What's a bolt bomb
10969545
Well, technically it's a grenade, so to speak. If someone triggers it, it will detonate.
10969548
Oof
10968955
Any final questions you want to ask?
10969635
Nope.
10969663
alright. guess I'll see you in the next chapter.
10969432
Cool to know that.
10969685
yep