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Absentialucci


Not much to say. I read stories, try to support the ones that touch me. Now I'm starting to give more. It's a good feeling

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Queen Chrysalis, the sole ruler of Changelings, knows that if things stay the same, her hive will starve to death.
The hunting grounds, used for centuries by her hive, the hive of her mother, the hive of her grandmother, and for the entirety of the Changeling Hive's existence, have run dry. Her hunters have to search further and further... but it's not enough.
She has to expand, and the closest nation is that of Equestria. Her hive must come first.

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Unbeknownst to Chrysalis and the three princesses, another creature had observed what had transpired. A dragon, having stayed hidden and out of sight, quietly made his way a safe distance, before taking off and flying towards the dragon lands. An alliance between Equestria and the Changelings would be troublesome for their own plans. He had to let the High Talon know. Expansion had become much, much more difficult. They needed to change their plans, and delay their action. They needed to upset the balance of this alliance if they had any hope of expansion.

If I didn’t know any better I’d say you have something planned.

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Maybe a little bit of something...
Will probably take a while before it coalesces, I like to plan these things out

I loved this and I feel like in the future there will be a sequel but Idk I loved this storie and I hope were see more soon you erned a follow and this storie into the favorites

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Glad you enjoyed this! Yes, I do have a sequel planned. Just finishing up one project at a time.
But rest assured! I have plans

“As your student and my liaison Twilight Sparkle can tell you, we have discovered a phenomenon of sorts that we had never seen before. When changelings share their love, it flows between them in a mutually beneficial way. Both changelings are filled, and can spread their love to others in the hive. In this way, we can sustain ourselves without draining anycreature. The only issue is that we cannot change and evolve without the introduction of new love to us! I have not been able to find out what it’s like if another creature and a changeling were to interact in such a way, as I have ordered my hive to not touch your subjects. Twilight Sparkle kept many notes on the experiment, and subsequent theories that arose. This means that we will not starve if you refuse my plea to work together, but my proposal remains the same. I would like to integrate my changelings naturally into the nation of Equestria, they will be clearly shown to be changelings, and the hope is that the exchange of ideas and love will become mutually beneficial to the two of our great nations. I await your decision, with respect.”

it is a pity that, based on the first law of thermodynamics, "energy does not arise out of nowhere and will not disappear into nowhere" - and from this it follows that "the consumer can never generate more energy than it consumes."
no matter how ideally the energy circulates inside the system, it will gradually become less and less (due to the expense to maintain vital movement and related processes) and over time the entire system will stop.
if this were not so, then the perpetual motion machine would have been invented long ago and the energy shortage would not exist in principle.

I enjoyed that the eaters of love were basically infected by it to the point that they could then visualize the possibility of respectful collaboration.

A few minor grammatical points were temporarily a little distracting, but not enough to divert me OUT of the storyline.

As someone relatively disconnected from the MLP miltiverse, I was able to grasp enough through the interestingly descriptive character insights that I didn't really need to be fully immersed in the genre in order to enjoy the story on its fundamentally sound merits.

I've also enjoyed the author's candidly transparent responses to fan posts about the ups & downs surrounding the creative process.

Looking forward to seeing more!

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