Past Sins AU. What would happen if Nyx was found by some-pony other than Twilight Sparkle? Some-pony who did not have her best interests at heart-- like a certain Changeling Queen? Inspired by Glimpses, by Pen Stroke.
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Well, I'm interested,
Cool so far! Though dark and scary as well.
Well now, this looks to be an intriguing divergence...kind of worried about how poor Nyx will develop,,,
And we desire more
gave it a like, but it doesn't want to register it
Not bad at all, tracking.
Really good fic.
Don't you dare stop
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I shan't! Thanks for reading!
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You're killin' me with this waiting period. What's the progress?
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I’m halfway finished with Chapter 2. I write it when I can, while also working a job. I have not abandoned it. In fact, I have the chapter sketched out, so I know how it is going to go.
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lol I get that. As a matter of fact, I'll be uploading my Nyx story on the 10th of August. I've got about 9 chapters finished so I'm halfway done and I'm working on chapter 10 right now.
I can send a link to it when I put it up if you want
Интересует. С нетерпением жду продолжения!
Interested in. I look forward to continuing!
So Celestia hates carnivores and omnivores, everything that eats meat?
A new chapter AND a date today?! I am now in a good mood
I was so happy to see it updated again.
Keep up the great work!
for starters, princess Luna could try reconnaissance in a Nyx dream
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Luna can't go in to Nyx's dreams, because the Nullifier Throne disrupts Luna's dream-walker ability. I thought I had included dialogue clarifying that, but it looks like I edited it out by mistake! I will have to clarify this in another chapter. Thanks for pointing that out!
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No, but meat-eating is really disgustful to ponies, at least in this interpretation of Equestria. She was okay with Thorax after all, and was used to the idea of Changelings as predators. What disturbs Celestia is that a pony is eating a diet of mostly meat and isn't suffering any negative effects from it.
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What about bat ponies/thestrals?
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They're fruit bat ponies!!!
In all seriousness, I haven't seen a bat-pony with fangs, so I think they're just ponies with bat features. Perhaps an offshoot of Pegasus ponies? But no, they don't eat meat in this story.
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Okay
Also on another topic
Doesn't meat have nutritions inside that feeds/evolves the brain that made monkey evolution into humans possible?
Nyx is an omnivore, right?
Nyx lineage, children, etc will be superior to ponies and evolve? 👩⚕️👨🔬
I won't mind if that's true 🦇
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Actually, the throne may mistake luna for nightmare and therefore allow the dream walking.
Another possibility is that the queen may take nightmare out for 2 nights and 1 day.
forgot her former student name,well done celly
call the hive idiot,then BAN reading.....
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I thought there was something off about the name, but couldn’t place it! I should have proof-read this chapter one more time...
I was able to fix a different mistake: for some reason, I called Sunburst “Starburst.”
Plz update
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I’m still working on 3. I hope to have that up as soon as possible.
Great work! Any info on when the next chapter is coming out?
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Hopefully, by the end of this month. Maybe April. I can say that chapter 3 will be 10,000+ words. I have also written scenes and snippets for other parts of the fic that also amount to nearly that many words.
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Wow, that's a lot! Can't wait to read it all. Keep up the amazing work and have fun writing!
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Can't wait I love it so far
Any news for us?
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I have completed the main working draft of Chapter 3. Now I come to the editing/ revision part of the process, where I work to find as many errors as possible while also improving the prose. The Word manuscript is 15,560 words long and extends 37 pages! So please bare with me a while longer. Thanks!
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The waiting periods are REALLY long, so I hope it will be worth it, but I have trust in you. Just don't forget to give a sign of live every once in a while. Can't wait to finally find out what will happen to Nyx (or well, Nmm). Nyx = best pony
P.S.:
This is amazing, can't wait to get my hands on it!
nice work, I hope we are going to see more to Chrysalis, and if it is possible to have her "reformed" I am sick of the storys that uses her as a cartoon villain with no motives or backstory
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I hope there won't be reforming bullshit for Nyx
Like "oh Chrysalis was bad, I see it now, I want you Twilight to be my mommy" crap
Thorax should be later executed when Nyx will be back in control as queen
Sure Chrysalis did bad things but these were the only options
Celestia is only now nice because she has a puppet.
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At that moment Pharanx should have killed the traitors behind him
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I like see her holes and horn healed instead of those coloR-barf new forms. My opinion because I like the old forms better. Also is Onyx really traumatized by Chrysalis or the ponies who got rid of her.
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same here. About Nyx, I am more to the opinion that she is traumatized by the ponies
Oh yes! Going to read it in the evening. My day is saved
So, now an actual comment:
1) Great work, thank you. Good luck writing the next chapter. Hopefully we won't have to suffer for 3 and a half eternities till it comes out.
2) Pharynx - best!
3) These damned ponies! They just decided for Nightmare Moon to be taken away from home and just be renamed without asking her whether she wanted either and even without a real explanation to her! Imagine if someone would do this to you. This is just ripping out a part of someones identity and actually traumatising. Such *******! I agree to the comment below (10263674). Please no reforming! We want to see an evil NMM, very evil NMM, who will make these ponies pay.
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You never heard of something like a regency or is it something else, Thorax? I higly suspect the latter. NMM has a claim on the throne --> is a problem. He can't just keep her around, but isn't tough enough to kill her and the princesses also want him as essentially an independent puppet, so he just wants to hoove her out and thinks: "Out of sight, out of mind!".
Once again agreeing to the comment below (10263674). I am also waiting for the scene where Nightmare Moon is going to expose this changeling's insides to environmental effects.
5)Nyx should eat Spike or Angel
I wonder if this story is going to involve The Ending Of The End, with a grown-up NMM and her cult having joined the Legion of Doom.
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Interesting idea! But all I’ll say is not to get too attached to canon here. I intend to parallel it in some parts, but I also wish to explore some of the ways Nyx’s presence would alter canon.
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I agree with 1-4. But with Number 5??? WTF!!!!!! Why the Heck would you want Nyx to do that to Spike?! And do you want to Piss Off Fluttershy if Angel Died?
Grande! Complimenti! Ottimo!
Nyx wasn’t abuse by Chrysalis, she was loved by her and Thorax is on her chopping block.
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yes, I agree with that. Also, Nyx doesn't have to wait long for her mommy to save her, and I hope that Thorax get what he deserved, for take a child from her mother
So glad to see a new chapter, even if it is a bit shorter. I love Nyx fanfics in general and this one has the perfect idea in my opinion, so keep it up!
1) Discord feels just like... well, Discord. I think you capture his behavior 100% accurate.
2) It's cool to see how Starlight starts getting thoughts while Twilight is all like "aww the poor little Nyx!". It also works very well with her character. I'm just a bit worried that you might overdo it a little, so that it will make Twilight actually look a bit stupid when compared to Starlight, but I don't think it will happen.
3) Now that she's not under the influence of Chrysalis's throne, I wonder what Luna will see in NMM's dreams, since she is worried she'd surely check. My guess would be hunting.
4) Speaking of the night, we did say that NMM is a night pony, right? That means she'll be walking around the palace at night. (Ha, just like me, just I don't have a palace)
Want Changelings Can't read but how bo they get info?
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While they aren’t able to read, the Changelings do have an effective communications system. I believe I demonstrated this fairly early in the story, when Chrysalis brought Nyx to the Hive. Between landing at the Hive and their arrival at the Atrium, the entire Hive knew about Nyx before Chrysalis even had a chance to introduce her. They’re a lot smarter than Chrysalis gives them credit for.
Thanks for the favorite!