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ScarletRhine


[Fan of MLP scince G1.]

Comments ( 33 )

Seeing a "Fall of Equestria" Story being a E-Rated story of all things is FRICKIN impossible and illogical for me??!!

Plus, you do have some words in their, that is meant for a older audience ( Teen-Rated and M-Rated ).

"Porn" tag and rating E?
impossible

Hey, Buddy, you rated your story incorrectly. You gotta change it to T or M if you don't want someone to report this.

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My Apologies, the story gave a lot of trouble when I was uploading it.

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My Apologies, the story gave a lot of trouble when I was uploading it.

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My Apologies, the story gave a lot of trouble when I was uploading it.

Lord of the Rings vibes. Frodoshy.

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So, you fix it? Thanks, I was actually want to help you out, so you won't get in trouble by the Moderators.

After reading this..... No word

If Angel Bunny were to die this is how he would want to go, protecting Fluttershy.

The deer are the enemy of the caribou? Really? That sounded like dwarves have issues with elves. I blame the caribou and I say kill them with fire :pinkiecrazy::twilightangry2::flutterrage:!

And second, aren't the caribou are related to deer?

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like drow are related to elves:eeyup:

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Point taken. They hate each other like in every fantasy theme. But just so you know, if things are different then someone must protect Equestria from those barbarian reindeer since they're names and culture are based on Norse mythology like Vikings such as Dainn's name.

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You know if the Deer are like Elves, then Caribou are like Dwaves who hated each other's guts.

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Actually the caribou are more like orcs which elves loathed.

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Wow, and I thought the caribou are like dwarves because of their names like Dainn’s name is a dwarf name.

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The Caribou act more like orcs.

Nation run by females?
Invade and put the female their place (on the bottom with a dick in their cunt).

Plus dwarves aren't closed to females in charge.

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Did I mention I hate Dainn for what he did?

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Then he's the reason why I hate his kind for being rapist on the mares. The only thing I really wish is that someone had to go to Equestria and defend to ponies from those reindeer and stop their leader. Plus, if you say is true about the deer, then they might have issues with the ponies.

And why did you have to cancel the story?

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LI couldn't think of a rant for Fluttershy to say to the leader of the Ponyville Garison. In the cartoon everytime she used The Stare she went into a rant.

Also I don't think I write large scale battles very well.

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Writer's block

Plus I un-cancled the story.

Hey, when's the next chapter? Because it great that you've show that Equestria has allies. Most other stories don't show it

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I'm fighting the eternal enemy of writers everywhere. The Alicorn of Frustration, Writer's Block.

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Okay, hope you will be able to figure it out

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