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twilight_aurora_sparkle


twilight sparkle fan till the end of time [if you didn't know that by seeing my library ;) ]

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"Harmonia per gratiam scriptor, we choose twilight sparkle" Intoned all the Immortals of the world.

The heartbreaking tale of Twilight Sparkle, omnes electi as the Avatar of Harmony.

**All these warning tags are implied, except violence**

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Comments ( 14 )

What do all of those foreign words in the synopsis mean?

Since the birth of this version of Twilight is different from others, will she have parents? or some mother/father figure?

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it is given in the Author's box, check it out, it's Latin:twilightsmile:

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Just wait and see what I have planned, it will be awesome:rainbowdetermined2:

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yep:pinkiehappy:

Thanks for the comments

I hope for some Celestia+Twilight (mother+daughter) relationship here!

Bit TOO confusing on what's going on at face value.

As in I could not paint a picture in my head of either the actions being taken, or who was doing what.

May want to be careful with that.

Also very nice with that Eragon reference.

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thanks so much for the advice, will be sure to follow it:twilightsmile:

this feels like i just jumped into chapter 60 of the third Sequel of a series. that is to say i have no clue what's going on... is there a prequel to this that i missed?

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I'll be waiting! Too bad the updates will be erratic:applecry: but I understand why.:raritywink:

I wanted to mention that in some parts of the chapter, I got lost as if I had to know something in advance to understand this chapter, I don't know if in the future you plan to give more details or explain to understand the context.

Will we have baby Twilight or filly Twilight? It's always lovely to read fics that contain one or both versions of it, I guess I'll have to wait to find out as you said.:rainbowdetermined2:

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Of course ill explain, its actually food for thought if I have writer's block. Don't worry, I'll explain things either way.:pinkiesmile:

2 things, I thought Cadance was a former Pegasus just like Luna, secondly, what the actual hell is even going on, also is this canceled?

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Hiii thanks for the comment. Soooo, when I wrote this I was a slightly ( read completely ) overconfident 14 year old with her only experience in writing being school essays, and a very hyperactive brain with too many ideas. What you see before you is the product of one night of furious scribbling while desperately trying to clear my head of the ideas that were bouncing around rent free. Needless to say, it hasn't really worked out so well. I won't go into the details but I'm trying to sort out the lore in my world, and then work on writing proper, coherent dialogue. Also I think I went a touch overboard with the mystery element 😅.

However, being a 16 year old in india is kind of it's own challenge, especially for me because I study 2 classes ahead. I'm graduating school in a few more days so I'll have some free time to dedicate to my story. Hopefully.

Also, I've realized that I cannot write this on my own. I had been looking for somebody to help me write it, but everyone I asked had to decline due to personal reasons. I won't give up though, and when I get more time and some help, I'll definitely finish this.
Thanks for your patience:twilightsmile:

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