Sweet Pepper had a friend.
Sweet Pepper knew she was fine, that her friend would keep her safe. Sweet Pepper knew she wasn't alone, but she had a sinking feeling that all was not right.
Sweet Pepper had a friend.
Written for the Quills and Sofas Genre-Swap panic where we were given a prompt and a genre that we couldn't write.
Preread by Jay, nagolucky, Mushroom, applezombi, Scoping Landscape, Silent Whisper, RedParade, and Sunlight.
Edited by ScryingMind/Caeso, AuroraDawn, and WritingSpirit.
Chapters (1)
Damn Boy! This be good.
Vampire
sbeet bepper
She died?
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sbeet bepper
This really like how this turned out! You did a good here. Keep doing the goods.
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Use your imagination.
Hurray for vampire mind control!
Seems weird to mention the vampire bit in her internal monologue, but otherwise a nice decent.
Hmmm
*Sips Coffee*
Hmm that tasted great! I like this vanilla latte!
mmmmMm...
w-what was I drinking again? It tasted... I don't know... fine maybe? W-what was I talking about?
Whatever- I must've lost my train of... hmm... nevermind.
Only thing I can think about is- great short story!
Those times when you intellectually understand the error you're falling into but then emotionally fall into it anyway is a most kick-in-the-teeth feeling
The story does a finejob of conveying that stream of consciousness which is full of inconsequential and ambiguous details, the likes of which I'm relieved only assail me in my sleep (as far as I know!)
👏
This was a pleasure to read. Like, I didn't really do much editing either, I just loved what's there already.
Great job on this one! Keep up the good work!
Howdy, hi!
A review from the mansion to you!
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