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Fuck, that line!
I liked this. Especially the interactions between AJ/Rarity, and among the crusaders. I thought that there was a little whiplash in feelings -- each time Rarity and Sweetie started making out it seemed a little quick given the situation. But all in all it was sweet and interesting.
So . . did AB ever learn that SB was not actually drunk as Scoots had not spiked the punch?
Man, I wish there were more stories like 'Dear Sweetie Belle' that explored the idea of Sweetie being Rarity's daughter.
Monkey's paw: (finger curls)
Honestly, nice story. Really enjoyed the Rarity/AJ dynamic.
Sooooo.
You will be telling us how Scoots knew that bit about the laws, right?
~Skeeter The Lurker
Excellently-done. Quite good drama, and some nice sex scenes.
Rarity clenched her first, steadfast on that point
fist*
you were right, i love it
lots of pain/angst, and I got some dokis and warmth too.
however did you know?
This was a really good story!
Now write them loving and caring for eachother in a healthy sisterly manner.
Oh please! Do it!!!
Don't you mean: Sweet Celestia! 😁
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I considered it, but for some reason I decided to take this story kinda seriously.
Highly underrated pairing. It seemed implied that AJ and AB had a secret too, but I couldn't pick up on it - was there anything between them?
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I assume you mean in the kitchen?
The thing there was that AJ's conversation with Rarity was happening at the same time as Sweetie's convo with AB and Scoots, so Bloom was still feeling from what Sweetie told her. That's why she's acting kinda weird when she sees Rarity.