- Member Since 3rd Feb, 2014
- offline last seen May 12th
Marezinger Z
Always looking to learn and enhance my craft as well as share in the fandom fun.
Marezinger Z
Joined 3rd Feb, 2014 ·
Offline
Sequels1
-
Marezinger Z · 26k words · 9 5 · 231 views
Featured In14
Clopfics11,581 stories ·15,835 members
The Writers' Group56,711 stories ·9,317 members
- Struggling Authors25,233 stories ·3,674 members
I Just Want a Comment15,779 stories ·3,686 members
Anthropomorphics7,649 stories ·5,015 members
The Shameless Self-Promotion Bureau49,506 stories ·5,470 members
Readin' it for the Plot1,565 stories ·3,206 members
~The Decent Writers Club~9,320 stories ·1,675 members
Stats
Page generated in 0.161 seconds
Total duration
984 users online
246,990 hits today, 2,924,228 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I almost went to be until I saw this. Had to start reading it now.
Strong start. Looking forward to reading more.
I can imagine Stellar Flare being a business like this. It just makes so much sense.
Interesting use of Cloudy Quartz. I'm surprised Igenous is dead in this but given where you (might) go with this I think that's probably for the best; meaning you couldn't pull the same stunt like you did with Citrius, Evershy, and Windy Whistles.
Another great chapter. Looking foward to seeing where things go.
Good chapter. You really capture Stellar Flare's personality in this one. I also like how it seems she has trouble attaching heself to other creatures or ponies. I assume there is a story there.
10288102
Yes. This story is going to arc with Stellar and Cloudy both coming to terms with how they are handling relationships or the lack thereof.
I do wonder if Cloudy Quartz and Stellar Flare will get it on together in the future?
Great work keep it up
I wonder if Cloudy and Stellar will talk about their husbands in the future? Also, I do hope that there will be some scenes of big MILF booty action in the story. Other than that, I’m loving the story so far, so keep up the great work on it and I hope the next chapters come out!
I'm happy for Stellar Flare; glad she didn't kick Arcus out this time.
I hope Cloudy gets some action at some point.
10296899
Thanks!
10297575
I won't leave Cloudy hanging.
I liked how Cloudy interacted with Earnhardt; I can feel a connection growing between them.
Really like how Stellar Flare is still conflicted with her feelings but at the same time won't be intimidated by this spirit.
Each chapter gets better as this story/series continues.
The argument between Cloudy and Stellar was perfect; one trying ot open her heart but feels it might be a let down while the other does not want to open her heart in fear of betrying the one she loved even after he's gone. I'll admit that I was a little worried about how you killed of Igneous for this story but I'm glad to see the payoff it's doing and how it effects Cloudy's chraracter.
I also like the nod you made to Twilight Velvet too; looking forward to seeing who she'll pair up with in the next sequel (assuming you'll still do more sequels of this series).
This was a really sweet chapter. Loved the interaction between Stellar and Arcus and I liked that Cloudy is taking steps into the dating-sex world after a long time.
Wonder if Stellar and Arcus’ night of fucking will coincide with Cloudy’s own time of lovemaking?
I'm really happy for Cloudy Quartz. She found a way to move on (but slowly) and try new things.
From what it looks like, the next chapter might be the last one; or at least second to last.
Looks like things are going well for the two MILFs. I hope that they’ll be able to figure out the local legend before leaving.
I kind of want to see Cloudy experiment even more in bed.
Zoinks, scooby-doo-ing has been taking on a whole new level of pettiness and greed.
Dang, this was an intense chapter.
Is Sleight the same guy who faced off against Mrs. Shy and Windy Whistles or someone different?
10380934
He's a different villain for this story.
10381109
Okay, just wanted to confirm.
Does anybody else think Sleight and Solstice might team up to get revenge on the MILFs in the next chapter's aftermath?
10383538
I think so.
Now that was a twist on who the killer was; it was sad too. Overall, I loved this story and like how it ended. Looking forward to the next one with Pear Buter and Twilight Velvet; didn't expect that pair.
Also, if you don't mind me asking, does this mean you'll eventually do Cookie Crumbles with somepony else, like Mrs. Cake or Mane Allgood; she one of my favorite underrated milfs of mlp.
10387761
Honestly, I didn't plan on using Cookie. I know she's underutilized but I kind of swapped her out of the cast for Stellar. I don't know if she is more prevalent in the comics or something, but there isn't enough of her to work with for me at least; I know that makes her a blank slate, but I had a more solid vision of Stellar in my head than her. Depending on how long this series goes, I might be able to do something with her; but as it stands now, after the next story it will be where all six come together for what I intend to be the finale of all this. Glad you liked this one though, thanks for keeping up with it.
Those cards remind of Joker’s weapons. Also, how many stories of the MILFs are there going to be in this series?
10388487
No problem; just wanted to ask. Do what you plan to do. I plan to continue watching this series either way.
As someone who is (trying) to write Cookie and her husband, I know what you mean about blank slate. However, what made it easy for me, I knew that she was the opposite of Rarity so that's what helped.
I wonder what the next story with Twilight Velvet and Pear Butter will be about? Also, which other MLP MILFs are you planning to use in this series?
10392217
Pear and Velvet's story is one I'm looking to make more of a horror mystery. The story itself will still be 'mature' but honestly won't contain any sex as I'm keeping their relationships faithful and intact. As for more characters, these two will be it; I'll have a "main" 6 and the story will continue with all of them together alongside the various other character's they've picked up along the way.
10392369
So, I'm guessing that the next story will be something like the Scoobynatural crossover or one of those British drama crime-solving shows?
10392405
I suppose, although I haven't seen any British crime dramas. The base concept for the story is actually based on an idea I had a few years ago for a non-pony related short story; it was in the vain of Tales From the Darkside but I'm modifying it for use in my MLP world.
10394046
I see. Even though there may not be any sex, I’m guessing that Velvet and Pear Butter will have a healthy sex life with their respective spouses, right?
10472564
Yeah. I didn't want to mess with all of their relationships because that's just overkill. Keeping Pear and Twilight's marriages intact rounds out the balance between the six of them. Two are married, one is divorced and in a relationship with another, one is back on the dating scene after moving past her deceased husband and one is committing to a relationship after decades of being afraid of one. Everyone is in different spots and which opens up more options for interactions and dialogue.
10472683
I do hope that we will be able to see how Velvet and Pear Butter are in the bedroom after their story is finished.