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Mind Jack


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Wallflower has a crush on Sunset. Sunset is incredibly dense. Wallflower makes a plan to fix that.

My entry for Scampy's Sunflower Shipping Contest.

Rated T for crude humor.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 17 )

That was SO FUCKING PURE OH MY GOD

10760733
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Was my first time writing both Sunset and Wallflower, so I was a little worried. ^^,

Yo, Wally should've asked Pinkie to set up the fireworks, with her magical geode power and all. Even if Pinkie messes it up, at least we know there isn't gonna be Trixie's face printed all over it. :trixieshiftleft: :rainbowlaugh:

This was hilarious.

This was awesome, the last bits had me laughing.

If this is your first time writing these two, you did a great job!

10760832
Thank you so much! That means a lot.

Ri2

Who's Sunflower?

10761948
It's the ship name for WallflowerxSunset.

Ri2

10762070
I'm referring to how at the beginning of the story, "Sunflower" was talking to Wallflower. I think you meant Sunset.

10762076
Oh! Thank you! I didn't even notice that. Sorry. It was super late at night when I did my editing run. Fixed now.

"If you want to score, you need to head for the endzone, not the friendzone."

Yup. That's definitely Trixie.

The blue-skinned girl was wearing a full, black tuxedo and top hat in the middle of a public mall.

Like the fucking lunatic she is.

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Rarity politely put a hand on her shoulder. Sunset flinched at her sudden iron grip. "Sunset, darling, I went to detention to help her ask you out. If you don't go to her right now and accept that date, I will go to prison."

Amazing. :D This whole thing was great.

10981777
Thank you so much! That really does mean a lot. :D

10782119
Depends on the mall - some places, no one would look twice. :trixieshiftright:

God, this story is criminally underrated. The comedy is so cartoonish, but does not resort to swearing every second for shock value. Instant favorite!

11783046
Thanks so much! That really does mean a lot.

I have a similar sense of humor in much of my work. So if you liked this, check out some of the other stuff!

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