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Mind Jack


Bee horse go bzzzzzz. Commission prices and ToS: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/1025389/commission-prices-tos

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On the eve of Nightmare Night, Rainbow Dash is attacked by a mysterious horde of monsters and forced to flee her home. Even with Twilight's help, the situation soon grows dire, and both of them must band together to escape a fate too horrible to imagine.

Co-Written with Berserker88 for the Monster Mares 2nd Annual Contest.

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Not the Bees! Oh Luna the Bees! Aaaaaaaaa! XD

I hope this would get a sequel where the other three get turned

Also:

"You have beautiful eyes!"

You just HAD to put that line in there, didn't you?

Not that I'm complaining

I think it's a crime to give this story anything less then a bee

I just thought of another sequel that might be fun to see:
How being a cuddlebug affects the three in their normal lives, and how they might not only get used to it, but actually kind of like it.

Like, I could just imagine Dash getting snuggling incorporated into a Wonderbolts flight formation or two.

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That actually gives me a few ideas. My writing schedule is pretty jampacked right now, but maybe I can work on it a bit while warming up.

What a fun story. I wonder if there will bee any sequels.

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