• Member Since 6th Feb, 2015
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SC_Orion


Just an introvert who likes My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. I also like to write MLP fanfiction. Twilight Sparkle is my favorite pony.

Comments ( 7 )

Non-con is always great to explore with a character and their reactions to it, very nice.

Damn, that was great. You could feel the disgust and shame in Twilight’s works. Very nicely written, god work

Normally I'm not one for non-con, but I gave this one a shot on a hunch.

Her friends would hate her.

Celestia would hate her.

I think this really captures Twilight's way of thinking. You also did a pretty good job focusing on her reactions, not the actions itself.

Definitely an interesting story, and I can appreciate wanting to write something more experimental.

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Thanks. That’s what I was aiming to focus on, the reaction rather than the action.

That was a very interesting story, for just a one shot you did exceptional world building here. I could see this to be the start of how Nightmare Moon could fall again. Since it is non-con it would be interesting if Twilight would work from the inside to take her down or at least bring the "Luna" personality back. All in all I did think it was a good and interesting story and I think it could lead to a very interesting alternate reality world of Equestria.

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