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After agreeing to Twilight's proposal of having a date in an alternate universe, Rarity finds herself contemplating many things, including but not limited to: what it means to be a human, how are you supposed to walk on two legs, meeting teenage versions of yourself and your friends, and last but not least, questioning your entire relationship and the nature of soulmates.

Going on an inter-dimensional date with her marefri—sorry, girlfriend—was not supposed to lead to the existential crisis of a lifetime, but there was Rarity anyway.


Set in the same continuity as "The Swap". Absolutely not set in the same continuity as "Your Own Worst Enemy".

Cover art by the wonderful Maxima.

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I had already read this on your website but I am not against reading this brilliance a second time.

“Mhm,” she said, and nothing more.

Is this supposed to be "I said"? It seems like that fits better in context.

I wasn't expecting an update to this, but it's welcome.

Hullo Mono, I see you have returned.

Oh look a perfect excuse to re-read this story!

Why was this only on tracking and read later and not on favourited? x.x

Mono, you're a mad genius. Thank you for this.

“Well,” Glasses said, “Pinkie’s about to help me with a science experiment in the lab.”

Why does this line fill me with foreboding?

I've actually had an idea like this before, with the Mane Six being paired up differently in the FiM dimension and the EqG dimension. I think you did it better, though.

They really should have asked how Rarity and Rainbow got together.

I an sad this is a one shot. It would make a great series. Rarity helps Rarity . She sees how rainbow loves her twilight ect.

I do love multiversal shenanigans. Lovely work reflecting on could-have-beens and the dangerous of obsessing over them.

“Right! So, there’s no need to be nervous becauuuuse…” Her gentle smile twisted into a smirk. “Aren’t you all about loving yourself?”

I mean Rarity would totally date herself if given half a chance.

“ You look like a hideous beast!”

You really know how to charm a girl Rarity. :facehoof:

“After you, hot stuff,” Twilight said to me with a little bow, which succeeded in making not one, but two Rarities blush. A new universal record, no doubt.

Can't tell if they're blushing out of embarrassed or they actually thought that was smooth. Not sure which one would be funnier either.

I swear to you the following is true. This teenager looked at me, and then with great awe whispered: “I’m perfect.”

I was joking about her dating herself but now I'm unsure.:rainbowlaugh:

What if I was the WORST of the Rarities?! Could I exile myself to another dimension? But, oh God, what if Twilight was dating, I don’t know, Zephyr Breeze? What if I was dating Zephyr Breeze? Or Blueblood?!

Insert Flash joke here

Incredible story. Rarity being the unsure one is a nice change from the usual. I love the ending as well.

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