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okay moondancer all the way here .i love twi but mooney has the goods i love :raritywink:

so far the only way this could get better is if sunset went with them

I love that Stallone film, real funny too. :pinkiehappy:

An auspicious beginning... I am looking forward to seeing where this goes!

A movie that has proven terrifyingly prophetic. I shall enjoy reading your take on it.

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I had briefly considered Sunset when I was requesting this but in the end went with Moondancer for a couple of reasons.

Please continue. I love settings like this one.

The outrage such crimes against the Anti-Chaos Laws would yield nothing short of exile, the harshest and most terrible of punishments.

Oh no...

This sounds like an over bearing mother who saw her kid scrape thier knee so she locks them in the bedroom for the rest of thier life vs the cool aunt that lets you do drugs and stab people if you can run fast enough

Well now. This should be an eye-opening experience. Looking forward to further developments.

Hee. this just popped up in my alerts. I've been hoping to see the new chapter. can't wait to get off work for it.

Alright you bastard. I came here for porn. And you have the balls to give me an amazing plot filled story that not only has well built characters but also a deeper and richer plot then I was prepared for?! You sick monster.
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Give me another

well worth the wait buuuuut


MOAR!!!!!!

Slow burn... worth the wait though.

a society without sex and tasty food? sounds like the cult that starlight made back in season 5. exile sounds better then living in Celestia's kingdom

I found this chapter difficult to get off to. It ran hot and cold for a really long time,

It's a good thing Celestia reached out when she did. I give her twenty, maybe thirty years before her obsession with rooting out Chaos drives her to petrify the perfect, flawless examples of Mare and Stallion and wiping out the rest of the hideous, pulsating madness that is life.

Fortunately, Luna's here to shock some sense into her sister... hopefully. If nothing else, she'll happily keep poaching the portion of Equestria who can't take it anymore.

Also, I do have to wonder how this Equestria defines the virtue of Laughter. Comedy carries some inherent chaos of its own, after all.

Things are heating up... This story is very enjoyable.

Damn I love this story so damn much. Please keep updating it

Honestly, I think that Celestia is going to lose both Twilight and Moondancer to Luna once this week is over.

So that's why there aren't any foals to be seen. Kept out of sight and out of mind of the site moderators deeper underground.

Well, that was pretty long. Then again, it was a gangbang.

Oh wow. You really did just update this a few hours later. Nice

Needs some incest to brighten things up.

Ah, nothing like taking in the local culture with some friendly voices of experience, whether it's Rarity or... Well, see above. Here's hoping the girls will be able to form a cogent argument against Celestia once they're through here. Or, you know, be able to string two thoughts together that aren't "Ow, my everything."

if you do make something about the lower levels please use archiveofourown.org or cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org for the foal stuff. loving the story so far!

well she needs to go and glimmer needs to hang

Celestia wishes to destroy everything and desire the destruction of the world. Harmony is like a scale. When it is in balance there is peace, but it can only be achieved by an equal amount of Order and Chaos. A little amount of Chaos leads to change. Us growing old is one example of this change. Too much Chaos at one time leads to destruction. A little amount of Order lead to calming the little amount of Chaos and it can grow out of control. Too much Order leads to Stagnation. Nothing happens, nothing changes. This can be seen in the death of the universe. The stars grow cold and distance and everything fades away.

Now taking bets!
Discords gets released and blames Celestia and Glimmer for creating the disharmony

Princess Leia Organa : "The more you tighten your grip, Tarkin, the more star systems will slip through your fingers."

Now i want to see what happens next, can we expect a sequel?

The sex is great but I need I CRAVE more insight into the mind of this broken celestia. What goes through her mind and how she came into this state of madness

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Sequel has already been commissioned and is now on the waiting list

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Waiting list? Hmmmm I see. I just hope there's an update here so we all know when it comes up

Ah, yes, a good lesson to learn for all Sex-Questria settings. There always needs to be some kind of social balance to the hedonism. Work still needs to get done, no matter if you're surrounded by sex or not.

Moderation in all things, especially moderation. Let's just hope Celestia can learn that lesson with minimal casualties. Or at all.

This story is so damn good. Can't wait for the sequel

After re-reading this story, there's something that kinda occurred to me: What if in Celestia's kingdom there's a secret movement of ponies who are having all sorts of unprotected sex, and because of that there are all sorts of unreported pregnancies and untreated STDs?

“I don’t need you to rapey me for anything.”

I hope that is a very unfortunate misspelling of repay, otherwise shit went from 0 to 666 in the space of a few paragraphs. In all seriousness though great story so far.

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