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JaketheGinger


There are a few Jakes on this website. I'm the ginger one.

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Sometimes adventures aren't just epic tales of danger and glory. Sometimes changes within us can be just as great an adventure in itself.

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A simple one-shot for the Author Support group's first prompt. I tried to do something a little different here, in a few ways. One being that it's my first OC story. So because of this experimenting of mine, don't expect this to be pure gold. Hopefully though, you'll still enjoy it for what it is. :twilightsmile:

The description is really hooking me, I must read this, it's a shame I need to sleep now, it's a bit late on where I am XD

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aww. Poor Dusty. :fluttershysad:

I have to say, this is a wonderful one-shot. In a way, it's a growing-up story for Dusty. He's innocent, childish, and giddy with excitement about a new adventure, but once he uncovers the treasure, he realizes that lost treasures really were treasures to someone, at some point.

Good show. Good show. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks! :pinkiehappy: Although I have to thank the Author Support prompt review team for giving me feedback on it. Trust me, the pacing on this used to be waaaaay worse.

If you liked Dusty, look out for more of him to come. I plan to do as many prompts as I can with him starring in them. The next one is about a pony getting their cutie marks so we'll look back into his childhood and see why he acts...well...how he acts!

Simple, interesting and entertaining... I really liked it :twilightsmile:

Ps. "Author Support"? Hehe, I just joined that group a couple days ago XD

Very nice little fic. With a couple of true morals, too.

Write on! :twilightsmile:

She seemed to make a sly grimace as she saw Dusty’s mane.

What about Dusty's mane?

almost knocking over a terrified yellow pegasus in the process

Poor Fluttershy!

Sniffing the air, he found the aroma of the forest to be so natural it was unnatural. It sounded weird even just thinking about it.

Great description there :pinkiesmile:.

I guess the joke’s on you! Haha! Hah...” he cleared his throat, realizing how awful his joke was

Yes, that was terrrible XD.

The 'slug incident' was funny XD.

Dusty's interaction with Twilight was interesting.

Nice story :).

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