There are a few Jakes on this website. I'm the ginger one.
Twilight had never really seen fog before. The weather team in Ponyville had always checked the skies and made sure nothing disastrous ever happened. But one day, Twilight wakes up to discover that a omnious fog has enveloped Ponyville, obscuring everything. Worried, she becomes determined to find out the cause behind it.
But what she will discover will be nothing like she imagined...
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Damn it. Right in the feels.
What an interesting premise. This is going into my headcanon.
I have no words execept...beautiful just beautiful. It captured my interest the moment I saw it and you certainly haven't disappointed me. Thank you for this.
very well written, kept me guessing. i thought it was going to be some "the fog" reference but nope
Ooh, that had a very nice mystery, and I liked the reveal.
Very beautiful story. Well written.
Meh
I thought that there was going to be some sort of twist. I think it works better without one.
So beautiful, I really like that conception about fog.
Really well written and inventive with the fog, it was so authentic of twilight jumping to conclusions and everything as well, great writing
I was expecting something akin to Stephen King's "The Mist" The way you made it all mysterious and foreboding, even after finding her friends I was just waiting for the other horseshoe to drop and some horrible twist, but while there was a twist at the end and by some definition it was horrible (poor Raindrops) it wasn't at all what I expected, it's always a good sign when authors can legitimately surprise their audience. 5/5 moustaches
