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Names R.A. Spook. Website. Patreon. Kofi.

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This is definitely getting a read from me.

Good start, my dude.

And wept softly, her wing draped over him as she silently, gently consoled a sobbing child as a new down was ushered in on the White Estate.

New dawn

A young man slowly rose from underneath the covers, giving a soft sigh as he ran his slender fingers through his long, dark hair. His magenta eyes slowly blinked and tried to focus in as he groped for the set of square-framed glasses on his nightstand, finally managing to set them on his nose. he gave a small sigh and shook his head "Ugh....not quite yet. I'm gonna take a minute to get up here and freshen up a bit before I deal with any of that..." he said in a low, tired tone as he dragged himself out of bed.

Me every fucking day :)

"Well, hello, little one. My name is Princess Celestia. I am a Mark Two All-Purpose Companionship Class BioDroid. On behalf of the Hasbro Corporation, I am delighted to meet you, and look forward to looking after you for many years to come." she said happily, gently as she leaned down to nuzzle the top of his head. she stood a few inches taller than him at the withers, her head able to, of course, reach up higher since ponies have very long necks.

I would both absolutely hate and love hasbro simultaneous if they actually made this.

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Not quite the reference, but also a good song!

That was fast. :trollestia:

gathered his tho8ughts -- thoughts
he flushed a soft pink -- He
he sighed softly -- He
it was only when -- It

The lore is pretty solid, but I'm not sure it's in the right place. Reminiscing on how abused other biodroids are feels a bit like something that should be hinted at, but not elaborated on in significant detail just yet. On the other hand, it might work just fine with a bit of editing, so his Celestia is at the center of his thoughts, rather than Biodroids in general.

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hey now, it's just a kiss, keep the pickle in the pants >:3

I like it so far

I love world building and I think many people get bored because of short attention span but that is a reader problem not an author problem. Stories should be able to expand themselves to their fullest and it is good when it does even if some find it boring.

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I don’t like pickles
:)
;)

Oh, this is going to be an interesting tale.

Oh this is interesting.

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oh this a sweet and cute fic have you thought of doing a 2nd story to this with a certain adorkable purple princess.....maybe she could be a town assistant librarian who took over the library after the owner was too old to do it and she meets a kind man whos also one of the new bronies of g8 a future mlp generation whos down on his luck both financially and romantically whos trying to take care of his beloved mom who had cancer but is ill mostly all the time due to her poor immune system just thought id like to see more of this universe with other mlp characters

You have checked all my boxes for a good story, I will wait with baited breath

I hope my sci-fi lore stuff wasn't too boring! I haven't really done that sort of thing too much before outside of my FiO story last month.

Give me more sci-fi world building please

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I do take commissions, you know ^^

Interesting story, looking forward to the next chapter!

On behalf of the Hasbro Corporation

bruh, they're still up after all those years...

Aw man, I identify with this; I'd have to give the pretty horse lady a hug, too.

Tears, the penultimate secret weapon of any woman... bio-mechanical or otherwise. :trollestia:

Will other robot ponies appear in this story?

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Bio-Droids are not robots. They are artificially cultivated genetically engineered living creatures created to serve a specific task. Their structure is generally completely organic.

But There may be more of them, and I may make more stories ^^

Damn cock-blocking driver-AI!

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I mean, at least it didn't just pop the door when they got there . I am sure they would have been far more embarrassed to get caught out sucking face like that >:3

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That's not the only thing Celestia'd be sucking :trollestia:

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I'm going to be honest, this song was the first thing to pop into my head the second I read this fic's title...

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Oh I'm sure she'll have plenty to occupy her mouth once the flick starts.

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I'm also listening to it on repeat. I blame you.

Hallmark Hummer

:trollestia:

Super mushroom stuck, I see. :rainbowwild:

R.I.P. Robin Williams

I quite like this little universe you've set up here, sad to see it ending so soon, hopefully you find the opportunity to play around with it more in the future. it is a very interesting and new premise to me, the whole bio droid thing.

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I am glad you like it! I may make sequels in the future, though if you would like to ensure that more content comes out I do take commissions!

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thanks! when it's done ill be doing a poll to see whether I should do more and with what characters o be on the lookout for that!

Are you going to finish this story

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yeah! I am just working on some commish stuff atm but ill come back around to it shortly.

wow this fic is simply very good, I would like you to follow them, greetings from Mexico.

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thank you for your kind words!

Robin Williams 😢 Rest In Peace

This story is bomb, it reminds me of The Outer Limits. Keep up the good work! :moustache:

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